#ask-akise

[theescapistdiary]

//performs a striptease

"Go put your shirt back on.  AND PANTS."

[headlesshomo]

OMFG WHY ARE YOU EMBARRASSED THIS IS BEAUTIFUL i cry in your askbox, yeah ilu and our otp and sobs about precious everything, gaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH NOT MOE

THERE I POSTED IT. SADFTYGDHUFJKASD IT'S NOT LIKE I DID IT BECAUSE YOU GUYS SAID IT WAS GOOD AND IT MADE ME SO HAPPY THAT I BELIEVED IT MIGHT ACTUALLY BE OKAY OR ANYTHING. I JUST.. YEAH. SDHUDJSFSDAIFJK

B-But thank you.. I love you, too..

Th-Thanks for your constant support... hauu..

[headlesshomo]

A review of sorts.

Too late, Akise-kun. written by asksecondworldgod.

Kami Yukki-mun had asked for a review, which I will willingly give. She had said that there were grammar mistakes.. And all though at this moment and the first time I read it, I couldn't find faults, I'll read through it once more right now for accuracy. Maybe my tears made it so that I couldn't see these perceived errors? Because this was so well-written that it made me cry. Not to mention that I had a song suggested by Kami Yukki-mun playing in the backdrop, creating a.. mood of sorts. Anyways.

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I just read through it again, and.. what grammar 'errors', dear? I found only one.

"Pain is all I can give to you then, and pain is all I can give to you now."

- all that's needed is to replace can with could.

Other than that, I found none. Unless I missed it, there's nothing.

Now, on to my unprofessional review.

I cried. I've said this, and I'll say it again. I cried. Your (can it be called a story? I'll call it one anyways) story invoked emotion into my system - mind you, I'm not emotional today. I took my medicine, so actually, I'm more or less numb unless I encounter stimulus. So making me cry means you made me emotional during my 'numbness'. Others may not understand, but to me.. it wasn't shocking at all. Your writing's lovely, so I wasn't surprised I was emotional. I expected my eyes to prick with tears, but they overflowed. I cried.

Another thing: what you wrote had a platform. A starting point. It didn't simply start off as the confession of death and what-not, it started off in a way I hadn't expected.

I'm bad at reviews, so.. before I lose my ability to sound intelligent, I'll say these final words:

I'm glad you use your talent and write. I always look forward to what I'll read from you. Please, keep it up as long as it makes you happy, yeah?

[askamanoyukiteru-blog]

AKISE REPLIED TO ME...

[askamanoyukiteru-blog]

Akise why

Akise Aru: SHUSH YUKITERU

Akise Aru: SHUT YOUR LIPS

Akise Aru: DO THE HELEN KELLER AND TALK WITH YOUR HIPS

Amano Yukiteru: oh my god

[askamanoyukiteru-blog]

ask-akise said: I’ll say it as many times as it takes

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[headlesshomo]

Honey, I'm home!!

Oh god which fantasy has been fulfilled is it all of them? hmm.

I would confess and be all, "A-Akise-kun, do you have a moment? If not that's cool."

And you'd be like, "No, it's fine. I was just staring at Yukiteru's but. Was there anything you needed?"

And I'd be all, "I'd like for you to solve a mystery!" and you would stare for a moment, glance at Yukiteru's butt, and then smile saying you have a moment. And then I'd say, "It'll probably take your whole life. The mystery of my heart Akise-kun!"

And you'd be like, "What..?" [/looks at Yukiteru's face] "I think I'm a bit too busy with some of my own.. mysteries of the heart." 

And I'd be like, "That's just it! My heart's been stolen by you! You've absorbed my heart because your heart didn't have enough space to hold your love for Yukiteru-kun, you jerk! You better spend the rest of your life finding a way to give me back my heart!"

And then Yuno would cut off your head and I'd die with my heart being stolen and my otp being eliminated. 

Dead End. 

[askamanoyukiteru-blog]

ask-akise said: //akisses you

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//yukkisses back

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