Share a World of Darkness writing snippet
Idea from @crownedinmarigolds and stole the formatting from @mrsqadiral-asmai post link dividers by @pixopix
Please join in and share if you'd like!
Info: my big project im working on is a story following a Toreador fledgling, Carmichael Lee, who only had the briefest peaks behind the vail before being thrown into the world~~~~of darkness
I still haven't fully sold writing 1st person to myself but that's how I'm currently doing it. This snip is a bit of the intro and Carmichael waking up from his embrace.
The Carmichael Chronicles: Shadows Under the Bridge
Blinding pain darkens the sight. Heartbeats deafens the sounds. I want to stay, I want to run away. I want the eyes on me I want the eyes turned away. I want the touch, I want the pain. I want the change, I want the same. I want. I want. I want. I give.
A searing twisting pain pulled at my stomach like a burning hand trying to rip my guts out. The floor was hard as I landed on it. I didn't know I was in bed, or even moving. It didn't hurt. My body outwardly felt numb but, Inside It felt like every organ was at war with the other. My brain trying to push out of my skull through my eyes. My stomach pouring acid on my intestines. My every nerve electrocuting every muscle. My teeth felt like they were growing and shrinking at the same time. My mouth was dry. I felt a thirst like never before. The kind of thirst that would drive a man to drink sea water, knowing it will only do more damage but the vain hope of satisfying that thirst for even a moment would be enough to throw away salvation.