Chapter 3 of «Catachresis» by @banyanas
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check out @brushbanditarts piece for 2nd chapter over here
other works for this au: character redesigns | mossman and shadowfish
go read it!
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Chapter 3 of «Catachresis» by @banyanas
aka :p
check out @brushbanditarts piece for 2nd chapter over here
other works for this au: character redesigns | mossman and shadowfish
go read it!
Writing Tips: Poetry
Literary devices that may improve your poetry:
Subtext:
Subtext involves conveying deeper, unspoken meanings beneath the surface of your words.
Use metaphor, symbolism, or allusion to hint at underlying emotions or themes.
For example, in "The Great Gatsby", Jay Gatsby throws extravagant parties, hoping that his lost love, Daisy, will attend. On the surface, it's about social gatherings, but the subtext reveals Gatsby's desperate longing for a reunion, highlighting the theme of unattainable dreams.
Hendiadys:
It's a figure of speech where you express an idea with two nouns connected by "and" instead of an adjective and a noun. Add richness to your poetry by saying "fire and passion" instead of "fiery passion."
Example from Shakespeare's "Julius Caesar": "O, pardon me, thou bleeding piece of earth, That I am meek and gentle with these butchers!" Here, "meek and gentle" combines two nouns to emphasize the speaker's sorrow and gentleness in addressing the slain Caesar's corpse.
Epiplexis:
This is a rhetorical device involving a series of questions used for emotional impact. Ask thought-provoking questions that stir emotions and provoke reflection in your readers.
Example from Langston Hughes' "Harlem": "What happens to a dream deferred? Does it dry up like a raisin in the sun?" Epiplexis is used here to question the fate of deferred dreams, evoking a sense of urgency and frustration.
Subjectio:
Subjectio means turning a statement into a question, often used for emphasis. And often referred to as a “rhetorical question”.
Use this to make readers ponder, like turning "The sky is blue" into "Is the sky ever truly blue?"
Catachresis:
It's the use of an unconventional or strained metaphor to create unique and surprising imagery.
Example from Shakespeare's "Hamlet": "I will speak daggers to her." "Daggers" is used metaphorically for hurtful words, associating speech with a weapon, intensifying the impact of the line.
Prosopopoeia:
Prosopopoeia is personification, giving human attributes to non-human entities. Breathe life into your poems by making nature or objects seem human.
Example from Emily Dickinson's "Because I could not stop for Death": "Death kindly stopped for me." Death is personified as a courteous and patient entity.
Synecdoche:
This involves using a part of something to represent the whole or vice versa.
For example, the word threads means clothing, heels means high-heeled shoes, and a suit is a businessperson who wears suits to work.
This is part of my Writing Tips series. Everyday I publish a writing tip to this blog.
Ok so i just finished reading the new chapter of @banyanas lenguage barrier au and i loved it so i made a quick drawing. Character designs by @vryfmi
Catachresis- when a word or phrase is taken outside of its usual context, from the Greek word for "abuse" For example, when Hamlet says, "I will speak daggers to her."
(Picture of woman staring daggers at a man https://www.pinterest.com/pin/110338259592663927/)
Happy Amphibia Minibang Results Day!
Here are character sheets for changes that calamity trio's designs had went through in the «Catachresis», AU written by the astounding @banyanas
there's more to come as @brushbanditarts and i have made respective artworks for upcoming chapters. stay tuned and check out other works for @ampminibang!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/43679544
other works for this au: comic | @brushbanditarts’ illustration | mossman and shadowfish
BASEMENT UNION BASEMENT UNION
this chapter of «Catachresis»? chef's kiss, love these creatures, especially @banyanas's lore for them
bonus sketch and links under the cut