At first i wasnt really fond of chapter 1 AMBAR sequel but its finally looking really good 🥴 my weakness has always been dialogues, but i personally think this chapter has ummmm an “okay” script i think. I’ll reread it again tomorrow. Let it settle down for a bit before i do my first edit. But in general, i think i like ch 1 overall
Btw, theres a bit of influence by naruto. Its not as obvious at first, but i think chap 4-5 will show the bits of influence i got from this show (not my fault im watching naruto again and i’m almost done with season 1)












