Be honest: are you describing every punch because you’re scared readers won’t ‘get it’?" Lol.
I broke down why that kills pacing and what to do instead.
Why Your Fight Scenes are Boring
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Be honest: are you describing every punch because you’re scared readers won’t ‘get it’?" Lol.
I broke down why that kills pacing and what to do instead.
Why Your Fight Scenes are Boring
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