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I think I love Reid a little more every scene he's in

#bau team #criminal minds tv #criminal minds #spencer reid #criminal minds season 1 #criminal minds s1e16 #jason gideon #aaron hotchner #why'd they do two handshakes and then an awkward little wave?#scene pacing?#reducing repetitiveness?#characterization?#all three?#screenshots #my screenshots

"crying" and "too many thots"

AWWWW DAS SO SWEET OF U. . .. me wjen i start sobbing uncontrollably over fictional characters

#CHARACTERIZATION?#🧍 whats that !

#everyone keeps telling em i'm wrong #about like stupid things and there's one part of me that's like okay whatever we all make mistakes #but like it's been happening a lot really recently #and it makes me feel like maybe i just got suddenly crap at like #characterization?#see i told you it was about stupid things. ugh #anyway #ignore me

*CACKLING INTENSIFIES*

#just went on ontd and omg #the denial is so real #like tbf most of this season was meh so like loose ends?#proper pacing?#characterization?#no fucks were given #the only reason I caught up was because those girls were important to me #i have a proper canon ship #this has never happened before #i will be happy about it #and laugh at the ship wars because they tickle me

me? writing romance? it's more likely than you think.

#the fuck am i even writing #characterization?#believable conversations?#FRIENDSHIPS INTO RELATIONSHIPS???#THE FUCK IS THIS???

why would anyone not like your characterization of kirk?

//Um…I don’t know, Nonny…

(I’m not sure where this is coming from unless i reblogged one of those things and i can’t remember)

Well, I guess I’m a little iffy on my writing skills and often wonder if I’m playing the character correctly. I’m a new Trekkie, so that also puts another touch of doubt in there.

What do you think, Nonny? Is my Kirk to your liking?

#anon #ooc #characterization?

Waking Nightmares

Recharge didn't come easily to the Prime as of late. Not out of workload or the lack of privacy, but due to the tumbling thoughts that plagued his processor. Flashes of battles won and battles lost; the offline, the wounded, the lost. Early in the War, the devastation to peaceful city-states that had nothing to do with the factions. The younglings... Shouted commands and fire, crumbling buildings, the echo of jet turbines as seekers roared overhelm.

He forced himself away from the main console - having taken a moment when Ratchet was not there - to walk back to his quarters; a walk that seemed far longer than it should have. To the sides of him, he saw ruins. Phantom images projected onto the Base walls and floors. Sudden flashes of blaster fire. He grit his denta, optics shuddering against the memories, but they didn't fade. It was like this lately.

Moving to his private sanctuary - spartan at best in accommodations - Optimus stared bleakly at his berth then to the desk and second console that he rarely used. Recharge, if he could, would be his best option. Rid himself of the waking nightmare that seemed to follow him everywhere. Screams of fallen comrades, innocent lives, for the sake of what? A Doomed planet? A cause he supported only to have it fall to ruin? No... He couldn't allow himself to think that way.

Walking back the way he came, leaving his quarters empty, his berth untouched, Optimus Prime trudged to the Training room. He couldn't let his processor wander further. He was the unshakable cornerstone of his team. The Prime. There was no room for weakness, or emotion; his stoic faceplate unchanging. This was his duty, his burden.

And he would carry the weight of a planet on his shoulders with no complaints.

#feels #War #Drabble writings #characterization?#optimus prime