Hello! ;v; I read your demo and I really liked it! it's so atmospheric and I love the writing style. I have a few comments/questions for you,
I love the way the reactions are written, in that yea, if I was asked to spy on like a mob boss it'd be like "HUHH???" and if i saw someone getting the shit beaten out of them it's like "oh boy i do not want to look" and they just seem really genuine to me.
Sysba scary! that's all but I also want to be like, "you're stuck on earth? wow cringe."
reading your stuff abt dreamwalker characterization is sort of strange, I feel like dreamwalker is so close to my personality it's like sort of shocking but I do feel bad for him. we need 2 get him to therapy lol
are you going to implement ur MC background into the game a little? like if you are a doctor you get to do some doctor things or if you are detective you get to have some detective instincts or something like that? haha
does the barrier go into the water & into the ground? is attollo physically on earth? from the vibe I get the MC has never heard of this place radiation or no radiation and it seems like if something like this happened it'd be a (big-ish?) event? and does the barrier go into the sky? can the airspace above it be recognized or does it continue into space? lol sorry if these are so technical
It seems like the community is multilingual does that mean it's mainly english and other ppl in other communities also got trapped in attollo? (and i guess the offshoot is like,,,, is there school...... children,,,, do ppl have hospitals.... i guess LOL)
ty for reading all this ;v; and sorry if there is any repeats! (tumblr search function..........broken....)
Thank you for saying this!! You seriously don’t know how happy it makes me to hear that things seem genuine; I’m always worried about that aspect, so to know that they come across as believable is a big relief; also RT on Sysba and DW
Backgrounds will come up in some scenes, and some backgrounds may have applications (i.e doctor helping with medical moments or retail working a crowd)! Wanderlust and other aspects will be brought up as well.
Yes, the barriers go all the way down. I’m afraid your next two questions are spoiler territory, but the barriers do go into the sky as well. Any air travel above the region is diverted due to errors in the navigational systems that have been reported since the incident; think Bermuda Triangle, but closer to the U.S.
The community is multilingual—there’s an abundance of languages spoken, many passed down generationally. Also yes there are schools, and children, and hospitals; a few have been mentioned in-game already!
Thank you for your questions!