July Book Reviews: Terms of Service by Ciel Pierlot
I received a free copy from Angry Robot via Netgalley in exchange for a fair review. Publish date 23 September.
This book was already one of my anticipated new releases for this year, so I was happy to receive a review copy. In Terms of Service, first responder Luzia trades herself to the fairy-like Astrosi in exchange for them sparing the life of her young nephew. Plunged into an alien garden far from the sterile hallways she grew up in, Luzia slowly begins to realize that there is far more to the world than even the Astrosi know.
Terms of Service is a very worldbuilding-forward novel with a strikingly science fantasy setting. Luzia's home is dystopian, set in a gray world of corridors and failing life support systems, where people live off of ration bars and have never seen a live animal. The lush underground gardens of the Astrosi are deeply alien to her, not to mention their byzantine and punitive legal contracts. While Luzia sees the Astrosi as magical, it's clear that at least some of their powers are due to advanced technology, nicer food than nutrient bars, and binding contracts, rather than fairy magic. The mix of magic and aging technology make a compelling blend that's neither SF nor fantasy.
While the dystopian setting and plot focus on Luzia's slow journey to discovering the truth of her world is lightly reminiscent of the YA of ten years ago, the execution is very different. Most importantly, it means there's not a tedious romance with the Astrosi supersoldier who is loudly contemptuous about Luzia's inability to fight and shoot people. (Although there is an underdeveloped romance plotline with a different character introduced at the end of the novel). Luzia herself is a fun character--she's passionately devoted to her job as a first responder, and her narration constantly notes possible electrical safety hazards and degraded infrastructure. She's a woman looking for any opportunity to tell you Fire Safety Facts. Fundamentally, Luzia's first responder thing is a reflection of a desire to protect her community, which is also why she flat-out refuses to kill people.
Terms of Service is no Le Guin, but the worldbuilding felt fresh, the main character was a strong and original personality, and the pacing flowed briskly. Compelling.












