#cielxoc

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#シエル・ファントムハイヴ Unjust: The Phantomhive Massacre - lunalovecomicsのマンガ #漫画 #黒執事 #OC - pixiv

Time is ticking, their fates will end soon.

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ARG!!! WHAT IS THAT I SEE IN THE DISTANCE!? *looks through telescope*  HOIST THE SAILS, LIFT THE ANCHOR, NOTIFY THE READERS! IT IS A NEW CHAPTER!

Parrot: disestablishmentarianism is used to control the masses--

me: wait what?

Parrot: *SQUACK*

me: that’s what i thought you said..

[psych-kai]

elizabeth midford in fan fiction

dear black butler fandom who make ciel x reader or ciel x oc fanfics, stop making elizabeth midford a whiny little bitch. she will do anything to make ciel happy and she is a strong-willed character. this isnt fucking episode three of season one where we all hate her for being a selfish brat, annoying little bitch, and a huge crybaby. please don't taint elizabeth midford's character in your fan fiction. if your going to make someone out of character do it to everyone else EXCEPT elizabeth midford.

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Guuuuyysssss loooook *A*

My lovely friend drew this AMAZING DRAWING of Elsie and i’m in love with it!!!! Her art breaths so much life and i’m just at a loss for words fgdfgdfg I can’t stop staring at it ahhhhhh XDDD 

Please check out Tiff’s deviantart (she’s doing commissions!!) https://www.deviantart.com/taripaladiknight

and please check out her youtube channel too, so you can watch her speed paint videos! (she even made a speed paint of elsie ;a; )https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8M4EZhx7kI&feature=youtu.be

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Me, planning ch 12: In this chapter, Ciel and Elizabeth finally end their engagement that was planned since their birth. They will be understanding with each other and share the sentiment of wanting the opportunity to genuinely fall in love. Ciel found it with Elsie. Elizabeth found it with *SPOILER* and the conversation between them will remain cordial. There will be no animosity between them---- 

Me, writing ch 12′s Ciel and Elizabeth’s ‘cordial’ scene: 

.....well......ok than....

[tulipgardens1]

I write a kuroshitsuji fic about love, magic, fairies, and a gorgeous Fae prince with sterling starlight hair also under a sleeping curse who i imagine as my ideal Disney prince *cough* oh and it's a cielxoc fic :D

[fuckyeahhorriblekuroshitsujiocs]

Hazel Nightingale

Is sending a link legit? This is so sue and freaking bad/insensitive/stupid/illogical in general I just

Sorry, had to delete the link, didn't want a sudden wildfire on the creator's page. :)

Well, let's start from the beginning. I'm already feeling oddly cynical.

Name: Hazel Nightingale

Let's start with the outfit, hm? First, too much upper limb. I conveniently can't see how long the dress is, but I'm fairly certain it doesn't go down to her ankles. I don't believe bangs were a thing back then, either.

Race: Human & Demon *Waits for a tale of dead parents and a great deal of unnecessary murder.*

Gender: Female

Birthdate: dec. 20 1875

Age: 12-13

Height: 151 cm

4'11 or so for my American friends.

Eyes: Sapphire blue

Hair: Brown

Sorry, me being picky for a second. Without the historically inaccurate picture, I'd have no clue what she looks like. I'm not talking about purple prose and that sort of thing, but maybe something like, I dunno, "Hair: Brown, and an ideal nest for rats." That tells me a bit more about how her hair actually looks. Kind of fluffy, soft, but all tangled up and probably frizzy. Not really a Sue-ism, but I'm picky.

Personality:quiet,kind,caring,smart, serious at times, outgoing, loyal, fun-loving,bubbly, well-mannered and can be mean when needed.

Okay, let's start from the beginning. One, everyone is serious at times. Everyone has their own little triggers that garner that reaction. That description isn't helpful. Something like, "Hazel is brought back down to Earth when she feels violated or under questioning" would be more helpful. Now I know that Hazel is secretive, and is very sensitive to the way people treat her. I also know that she is usually relaxed and lets her hair down at almost every other time. It's the same thing with "mean when needed". Even I can get a little feisty. Again, "Hazel gets defensive and irritable when her weight is brought up with little discretion" or "Hazel gets testy when people make racist remarks" are much more useful and informative. Oh! Almost left out fun-loving. Okay, what does Hazel consider fun? Reading? Writing? Mountain climbing? Tell me about that!

Likes:singing,dancing,blue roses, playing flute, piano, and violin, drinking tea, writing, drawing, watering plants, sweet aroma's and going for a walk.

I still feel like I know nothing about Hazel. Add all the fun facts you want to, I don't understand her. She's a singer, right? What inspires her? Blue roses? (Brownie points to anyone who writes a song about blue roses.) What does she like talking about? If I were to look at just this and try to find out what I could, I'd assume she was a homebody who preferred to stay in her room doing musical and literary things, and end the day with a mug of tea. How interesting is this person? Really think about that one.

Dislikes:insects, rodents,lightning, fire, horrible aroma's, people who messes up, disgusting foods.

You dislike those? Me, too! So does everyone else on Earth. Tell me about things that people do or say that makes you lose your cool. Talk about the pet peeves and the things that would make you hate a person forever. I don't know this character, I only know things about her.

Bio: is ciel and elizabeth's childhood friend she moved to america with her parents.

Very...insightful.

Crush: Ciel

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*Buries head in hands.*

Well, see ya round, and keep submitting, my pretties!

-Journey

[fuckyeahhorriblekuroshitsujiocs]

Alexandria Eve Ross [Critique]

Name- Alexandria Eve Ross

This is an acceptable name.

Nckname- Alex or Rose (because for some reason she has a love for flowers, like most girls) 

I wouldn't advise against having her being referred to Rose. Most people aren't given nicknames by what they like. Also, I'd pick a more feminine version of Alex for a nickname, but that is a suggestion.  

Age- 14

Looks- Black hair with a somewhat of a bluish tint (but not so much that her hair just looks blue. No.) The tint only shows in sun or moonlight. Her hair ends at her shoulder blades. She has a lovely shade of forest green eyes. And she mostly loves to wear dresses but not ones with extreme frilly-ness. 

I'd avoid using the prose such as "forest green" or just "lovely shade".  It starts to feel more self-insert-y when that happens. It's also a flaw a lot of creators make. I'd just stick with "She has green eyes." or "Alex's eyes are dark green."

Since she's younger, she'd be able to get away with having her hair down. Also, most girls wore dresses, chances are she wouldn't wear anything else unless she was working [such as in the Old West].

Her distaste for frilly-ness is acceptable. Gives her a nice personal touch.

Other- She comes from an upper class family whom is involved with the military business a lot. Her uncles and father teach her to use different weapons for protection. She is very skilled (but still in training) with the usage of the sword and other weapons and can easily take care of herself if need be. But she doesn't really wish to take over the family business, she wants to be a poet or even an author.

You must be the Grey-Face that asked me about the weapons. Yes, this is good. I'd avoid having her learn toomany weapons. Weapons are still tricky to master, so at 14 she should only be effective in about two, maybe three.

Not wanting to take over the family business is a good place for conflict if you plan to Roleplay or write about her. Poets and Authors aren't known for their stable job, of course being from an upper class family, she'd probably be able to do it anyways.

A word on the family business. If she has a brother, Alex wouldn't be the one to inherit it. Most businesses went to the male heir, and if the Uncle has a son, or something as such, they'd inherit it. There is, of course, exceptions. However since she seems to have no interest in continuing the family business, that probably won't be a problem.

She is a friend of Ciel's and loves dogs and sweets.

Well. This is probably the only thing I'm weary of. How is she a friend of Ciel's? Is it through business? Through family? Because Ciel at one point saved her life and she's determined to make him regret it?  Since Ciel is a canon character without many friends, this needs to be explained.

I'd also add more to this list. If nothing else, just for your reference.

Crush- Ciel Phantomhive 

Assuming it's one sided, I see nothing wrong with this. Just make sure Alex realizes that Ciel already has a fiancee.

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Overall, I'd have to say it's a pretty good profile. However, there needs to be a personality. Everything could be perfect, then you hit the personality, and it's like the creator killed everyone you knew and loved.