#critique me

[m30w-m1nx]

im currently trying to figure out zanka and oml

im struggling worse than w jabber

sum1 plz help and tell me what im doing wrong 😓

he js looks so off 2 me

idkidk

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[rvslol]

Day one of drawing with pen until I improve!

- I need to work on my legs

- I need to use more guidelines

I'm using pen because with pen, you can't erase so I actually have to think about what I'm drawing and my lines:]

(Second image is my ref from Pinterest)

[bubbalumpkins]

pleasepleaseplease give me all kinds of tips!!!!

how to improve on my posing, on my coloring, on my character design, literally all of it!!! im trying to improve my art now that i have the time, and finally the focus to draw for more than just two hours a day!!!

[jaaskelainent]

Be very fucking honest. I'm an adult, it's fine. I can take criticism. I've obviously become obsessed with one particular picture and I've been sketching and mucking about with it. But I honestly have no idea of this is any good or not. It isn't finished and I don't know whether to continue. Is it getting there or does it suck? I kind of want to do a charcoal version at some point. I'm not doing the face. I'd never do it justice.

[anonymous-blahaj]

IM MAKING A VTUBER‼️

I’ve mean wanting to do this for over 5 years now. It was always just a far off dream but i now i just wanna make a reality. I have so much free time on my hands i need to work on my speaking skills. I’ve wanted to make internet videos since 2016. I just wanna do it already. I’m gonna save all my good video and stream ideas for when i actually know how to act normally out loud and I have people who would look forward to that.

Before i do any of that, I wanna make a live 2d model. I’ve already came up with some ideas. I don’t want my design to be too cluttered and i wanna have a clear thing that i am. I’ll also use this design as my self sona thing.

Which one should i do

prince

stingray

magical girl

sleep entity

sea bunny

re-animated dead body that died by hanging

Voting ended onJul 12

Maybe i could combine some of them but i cant do all of them. Which ones should I combine? Are these even good ideas?

This is what I have so far:

AAAAAAAAAAAAA

[scyonix-tumbler]

I absolutely love the design of the ninjas in the island even though the episodes weren’t that great.

I kinda hate this and would really appreciate any critique so I can fix it.

Why does shading and lighting have to be so damn annoying :(

[imbecominggayer]

Excerpt From My WIP

Feel free to critique my writing :D

Have you ever seen someone's vulnerable interiority? Those few moments far in between where a human decanter has been abused and left to pour their despair at your feet. As if you were a God? As if they were praying with their cries as hymns?

I always feared those moments. I feared many interesting things growing up.

I feared the day when mom would die. How I would be the only person who could be at the funeral.

I feared the day when someone would confess their love for me. How the light in their eyes would be twirling like flames with hope, or maybe shaking with fear?

I feared the moment when I could see someone in their purest moment. How I would be left with the choice of saying "I see you" or letting the moment fall past.

I feared those moments not because I was scared of grief, or scared of romance, or scared of another person.

In reality, I was scared of myself. Or my lack of self to be more apt. Confused? Don't worry. I'll explain myself.

To say that I "lack" emotions would be inaccurate. I can feel annoyance whenever a distraction interfers with my necessities. I occassionally have pangs of joy. I have felt grief. Joy. Love

unfortunately.

My emotions aren't strong.

When I was confessed to by a school companion in my youth with a two dollar flower and a million dollar smile, I felt an underlining of annoyance at this lackluster gesture. I quitely rejected them. I still made sure to grab the poor flower and put them in a vase as my mom always told me I should. Although, I never thought about them since that moment.

When a radiant sunshine revealed a tiny little hint of deeper awareness beneath their conspicuous joyfulness, I ignored it. That was the only time I had ever seen a pained smile of their face. There were some tears lighting up their eyes. I would never have that moment again. I ruined it.

The moment that sealed my fate was when my mother died after forcing her way through torturous chemo treatments and her own deterioration. At the bedside of own of the most loving angels that could ever grace this world, I couldn't even wring enough emotion out of me to cry authentically. I felt genuine sadness for her passing and joy for her rewarded sufferance, that was true. But it didn't feel like enough. This was the woman who raised me and I didn't even have the heart to be sad for the rest of my life.

At that moment, my greatest fears had come true, I was a grotesque monster who couldn't even bring myself to cry genuinely at my own mother's funeral. I spent more time in my childhood cottage thinking about my father more than my mother.

My father always called me a "nothing child" when I was younger. I still remember the exact words my mother said to me after she chased my father out of the house for the last time, "you aren't useless".

Maybe that was what my father meant when he called me a "nothing child" Maybe he really was trying to call me useless. But when my angelic mother died, when my companion was lost in romance, and when I lost the opportunity to discover humanity underneath my friend's exterior, I truly was a nothing child.

[pikoeatsglue32]

I tried mimicking ghost and pals art style