But it is neither in the book's more ambitious efforts like "The Clay
Dancer," nor in character studies like "Oshi" that White displays his
most powerful writing. The last poems in the volume, written shortly before the poet's death, may be White's finest achievements. Their language is deceptively simple, employing a quirky diction that without warning shifts from plainness to embellishment. In contrast to "The Clay Dancer," these poems appear to have come to terms with mortality. The knowledge of approaching death gives the speaker an almost paradoxical belief in self-renewal. Characteristically, it is a renewal born not of Rilkean mysticism, but of lucidity and attention to immediate experience. "Dying Out" begins,
I love the cambric night snowing down First Avenue
and the heaven of being near things I know,
my apartment, the old rugs and chair, the moons
of my nails above which I write.
And the snow in distant woods where animals
give silently all
and everything into dying - their fossils in spring,
the jonquil and pure bone.
In the poem's conclusion, White again returns to the sculptural metaphors of "An Ordinary Composure":
I've left so many this year
who've felt too comfortable with my old design.
Because I want another life rinsed new in middle age,
the way a hard sickness changes a person.
The way snow changes the billboards
by my drugstore to read VANQUISH PAIN and
RELIEF FROM THE ORDINARY.
I don't want forgiveness from people,
only to be seen from another way,
like the back of a sculpture,
perhaps the nape of a neck or an open helpless palm,
some familiar form viewed from another direction.
The stance here is one named in the book's penultimate effort, a sequence called "Poems of Submission." And the reader finishes the book believing that White has not triumphed over the forces he has battled, but he has submitted to them and in doing so has found a kind of liberation that is partial, but nonetheless convincing. In "Poems of Submission" and in "Naming," the book's final poem, the issues of memory, mortality, and sexuality that have propelled the collection are finally brought to closure. "Naming" is a moving tribute to the poet's mother. Here is its final stanza:
Old woman, my mother,
so full of sickness it becomes acquaintance,
don't die. The world is nearly empty for me.
Take me to your river of first words again.
"Look son, this is stone.
Here is flower.
Here between my legs you entered the world.
Call it 'door.'
Look son, another flower called going away, and this
is called too soon."
Perhaps a significant achievement in poetry cannot rest on a single collection, but there are moments of grandeur in The Salt Ecstacies, and they equal the best efforts of almost any of the poets in White's generation. Whether this means that the book will be widely read or not remains to be seen, but The Salt Ecstacies is a superb collection, and it deserves to be recognized as such.