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Same frame, different feeling. Light hits different when the city’s heartbeat slows for just a second. #moodystreets

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KOI WA DEEP NI (2021) - Episode 3

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Novel & Drama Flaws to Avoid

Based on a recent Netflix series I have been watching:

Characters explaining the plot to each other 

Plot revealed too early

Problems resolved too early

Lack of a solid plot problem

Clichéd dialogue

Repeated dialogue

Repeated scenes

Characters explaining the ramifications of the plot problem

Objects/people who have never been mentioned before suddenly being important to the plot

Culprits being too obvious

Stakes aren’t high enough

Characters explaining what they have to do to solve plot problems

Lack of solid limitations to character skills

 Too much use of foreshadowing

Too many romances

Characters being inexcusably foolish

Characters not knowing things they should know or could easily discover

Characters forgiven too quickly

Characters continually state importance of things and people, instead of leaving this to the readers imagination

Characters state when they are in trouble, when this is obvious

Characters either boast about or remind each other of their achievements

Characters state the obvious, especially concerning supernatural powers

Too many subplots

Disappearing characters with no explanation

Flat dialogue

Characters excessively flatter each other

Vital scenes treated as backstory

Repeated plot problems several episodes later

Unnecessary plot problems

Repeated flaws, little evolution

Unnecessary characters

Abuse of coincidences

Refusal to solve bigger plot problems

Characters suddenly remember things convenient to the plot

Pretentious philosophy

Very few shocking twists

Characters fade out of some episodes, then reappear. 

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You like the ocean, don’t you? 

Koi wa Deep ni (2021)

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You’re from the same company, right?

KOI WA DEEP NI (2021)

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Thank you...for helping me.

Koi wa Deep ni (2021) - Episode 2

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