#deviant's hostel

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DEVIANT'S HOSTEL (A Hazbin/Helluva AU)- Part 1

Located in a cold and congested hell, Charlie Morningstar tries to reason with his father, Lucifer, to help him defend the inhabitants of hell from the extermination of the greater angels. But the ruler's distant nature alienates his own daughter in a desperate attempt to protect her.

Can Charlie convince his father to join forces in a divided dimension?

(I'm not a great comic maker, but I do enjoy making them!)

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Charlie being the anti christ i really liked that and what make put that idea on charlie character

Thanks!

Charlie being the daughter of Lucifer + having a very "naive" and bubbly personality is the perfect combinación for the antichrist persona.

The antichrist represent a false prophet, someone who you can trust and lean on to when feeling down; but in reality, its purpose is to bring chaos and famine.

Her gaining the hearts of humans' over with false hopes of redemption just feels right for her.

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Many rewrite of hazbin hotel i've encouter a lot that lucifer is horrible father even mentally abusive

Same and I don't really like that take. Lucifer wouldn't be a bad/abusive father.

Lucifer can be tough, he can be cold sometimes, and some people can even describe him as cruel, but he is not abusive.

Lucifer in my rewritte loves Charlie just as he loves himself. He sees himself in Charlie and wants the best for her, but that can come off as over-protective and uninterested.

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Are the seven deadly sins also rewritten?( please don't get rid of asmodeus x fizzarolli they're so sweet).

Yes and don't worry, AsmoFizz still exists.

For the Seven Deadly Sins, I want to make them "concepts" of the sins. What I mean is, the SDS are living incarnations of each sin they embody; but these concepts are based purely on human ideas.

They change along humans. So, for example, Belphegor of Sloth is seen as a lazy demon who doesn't care for others nor himself, who can't keep his territory under control and lets it rot in darknes.

In reality, Belphegor suffers from severe depression and is very difficult to him to do anything without having deep feelings of remorse and sadness.

Humans and sinners cannot comprehend this, most of them don't "believe" in this excuse, because thats how human society view mentally ill people: lazy, uncaring and selfish.

The SDS are not villians nor they are bad. They are living concepts who change over time but cannot show their trueselves to living humans. They are cursed to accept this reality in other to exist.

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How does your rewrite lucifer treat overlords especially the one who...licked his daughters arm( cough cough valetino cough).

Overlords are not taken seriously by the Ars Goetia royalty, wich are the ones who truly rule Hell along side Lucifer.

They are seen as distractions for sinners. And I'm not really sure what to do with Valentino, because I do want to add him but make him less likeable/charismatic.

But if my Lucifer encountered canon Val, he would probably just erase him out of existance lol

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What is lucifer position in hell as the king or emperor

He is the emperor of Hell, also known as King of the Abyss!

But he rarely leaves his Ice castle

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In your rewrite how is lucifer created charlie

Lucifer made Charlie out of clay, tears and wool. She was created a long time ago, and Lucifer raised Charlie as his own daughter.

He might not be a very "present" father but he does love her as much as he loves any other creation of his.

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In this AU is charlie being disrespected same as the canon hazbin hotel

No, actually thats the main things I don't like about the show.

She is very well respected as her own being, the antichrist, not only for being Lucifer's favorite creation.

Although she maintains her naive yet firm personality.