Hi welcome to I lost all control this morning and would like to bring everyone down with me! Please join :)
Obligatory Jairus and Einn cuz they’re the only ones with actual content 🙃 I do love them though
And here we have Castys and Syll, who I wrote about once and will write about again soonish cuz I’m using them for my creative writing class because I have very bad Love Castys Disease. He’s so fun to write. And Syll just has to put up with him.
So we’re tagging @just-a-raccoon-with-wifi @galaxywhump and @my-whumpy-little-heart (I would tag the whole clown gang but I don’t wanna use up all the @ right away know that I love you all kk) As always, no pressure to do it and jump in if you want (●'◡'●) ✿
After trying to get this written/edited for like 2 weeks I have decided to say fuck it babeyy so uh here is my story. I’m sorry there’s not much whump the next installment will have a whole lot I promise
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Ingredients: noncon touching (unsexy), dehumanization, restraints, a little bit of choking (as a treat)
Jairus was supposed to be the strongest in the world. Unbeatable. The first dragon hybrid, product of a (semi) successful fusing of human and dragon souls. He shouldn’t have lost.
He wouldn’t have lost, if not for that crazy overpowered witch. But here he was, kneeling in a dark cell with his hands chained above him to either side. And his captor had just walked in.
Einn smiled as their eyes met for the briefest of seconds before he turned his head away. “Aw, don’t be embarrassed, little dragon,” she said as she approached and crouched down to his eye level, though he still wouldn’t look at her, “there’s no way you could’ve beaten me. This was simply inevitable. You know, I’ve never gotten that good of a look at you.” She reached out and tried to tilt his chin towards her, but he jerked away.
“Don’t touch me, witch,” Jairus growled. Einn sighed in reaction to the slur and stood up, walking around behind him.
“My darling,” she said as her arms wrapped around him from behind, whispering in his ear, “I don’t think you have much say in the matter.” His face flushed red and a shudder ran through him as her hands roamed around his bare chest, passing over patches of scales.
“Fuck off, you perverted witch! Why am I here? Why didn’t you... kill me?” He struggled to keep his voice level as he stared ahead, refusing to give her the satisfaction of his fear and discomfort.
“Oh, where ever did you get the impression I wanted you dead?” Einn released her hold on him and came back around in front of him. “Though I suppose what I want isn’t far from it.” An unnatural smile crept across her face. “I simply wish to take everything away from you, everything that’s keeping you from being human. Like this arm.” She traced her finger down his left arm, which was completely draconic save for the bones, and up underneath his chin. He tried to jerk away again, but her grip tightened enough for her nails to draw blood. “And these eyes.” Jairus finally turned his slitted pupils towards her, glaring with as much contempt as he could.
“What the hell kind of sick bullshit is that?”
“Hmm-my kind, I suppose. Now, I must be off to… get a few things in order.” Her hand fell back to her side, brushing against something in the pocket of her robe. “Oh, but I do have a little present for you,” she said as she went around behind him again. Jairus wasn’t sure what he expected, but the feeling of a leather collar strap wrapping around his neck was not it. His brain didn’t even fully register what it was until it was already (tightly) secured.
“What the-get this damn thing off of me! I’m not some fucking animal-” his protests cut off and dissolved into gasping coughs as she jerked the attached chain backwards.
“You really need to control that tongue of yours,” Einn sighed. She moved around in front of him again and secured the chain to the floor, forcing Jairus to keep his head bowed. “Ah well, that’s a problem for another day.” She walked to the door and opened it, turning back to say, “I’ll be back for you later,” before leaving him alone in the dark.
Back to an empty cell, Jairus scoffed. There was no way he was going to just sit and wait for her to come back. He wrapped his left hand around its chain and tugged it. Weak.
He was definitely going to escape.
(Please let me know if you have any lore questions I made this whole world and stuff up and I’m trying my best to explain shit as I go but it is hard)
If your characters were minerals, what kind(s) would they be and why?
This is it. This is the best fucking question ever. Everyone else can go home. Thank you.
We’re just gonna do my current 3 whumpee/whumper pairs (and Castys because I Have A Disease).
Jairus: Corundum (Al2O3)
It’s got a hardness of 9 (out of 10) on the Mohs hardness scale, and he is a tough boi so this fits. Also it kinda looks like a spear.
Einn: Diamond ( C )
Hard to destroy with their hardness of 10! (but just so we’re clear diamonds are only metastable at surface conditions whoever said diamonds are forever was wrong 🤗)
Corvus: Realgar (AsS) (it’s the red crystals)
Partially because the formula is AsS and he would think that’s hilarious and partially because it’s unstable at surface conditions and that boy seems unstable at surface conditions.
Flynn: Microcline (amazonite) (K(AlSi3O8)
I mean just look at it. It looks like a piece of the ocean. A piece of the great wave 😳🌊
Tourmaline often has these gorgeous bands of color, and that mixing of different colors that still remain distinct from each other, well :) it will be relevant later.
Neteri: Rhodochrosite (MnCO3)
Well it kinda looks like meat. And my girl loves to surgery. Also she likes pink.
Castys: Galena (PbS)
The lead in it makes it super dense. This boy is super dense (he inherited it from me 😎). That is all
Jairus: He really likes his green cloak since it’s nice and warm to sleep in (when they sleep outside). He wasn’t wearing it when he was captured so there’s no chance of Einn getting rid of it or something.
Einn: Her boots because they make nice stompy noises
Erebus: Not exactly clothing, but the ribbon he used to tie up his hair belonged to his mother, so it was really precious to him. I hope Neteri didn’t throw it away...
Neteri: She loves her long white coat. It’s very science!
15. Did you have a first draft for them? What were they like? Are very they different to the final draft?
I don’t typically write like “first drafts” it all just stews in my brain for a hot minute so this is more going to be on original concepts.
Jairus: He used to be a lot less egotistical and more hero-y but once I changed some stuff about his capture making him think he was hot shit just made it all so much more fun
Einn: She originally had nothing to do with Jairus at all and [REDACTED]
Erebus: He used to be feral as hell, like tries to bite you and just fucking angry. But once Neteri developed more and I decided what I wanted to do with the story, that just didn’t fit too well, so I diagnosed him with Scared and Sad. Oh and he was originally captured to marry the empress (who was entirely based on Edelgard from FE3H)(and it is an emperor now because I was like “damn maybe I should have a male character in a position of power for once”) but then I read Misery and needed someone to... well, you’ll see.
Neteri: She used to just be more talkative and not necessarily friendly, like she would just NEVER shut up, and this drove feral!Erebus up the fucking wall. But the friendly just ended up being so much more fun :)
Tbh I don’t think about clothes like that often so in general just like medieval-type tunics and shit (for all but Corvus and Flynn). We’ll go into however much detail I can conjure for our main peeps
Jairus: he doesn’t wear anything fancy but one thing that stands out is that like Chrom Fire Emblem his shirts always only have one fucking sleeve. He likes to show off his left arm. In captivity his shirt rights get revoked, so he really gets to show it off :) even though it is now...well, you know what happened to his arm (✿◡‿◡)
Einn: Long robes, probably darker colors
Corvus: big fan of hoodies and sweatpants or cargo shorts. He’s always wearing his Epsilon Gamma Gamma fraternity baseball cap backwards.
Flynn: swim trunks with weird crazy patterns and sunglasses. That is all. And a shark tooth necklace
Erebus: when he was living his normal life he wore fancy prince clothes, usually blue. His crown was a silver circlet type thing. Now it’s just like very basic peasant clothes? Because prisoner hours are now!
Neteri: Long white coat because scientist! She wears glasses and usually has a little red or pink ribbon in her hair.
🐶😃 for all your characters, 😇 for Einn specifically
For a handful of my whumpees:
🐶What’s the meaning of their name? How/why did you pick it?
Jairus: I just like smashed syllables together until I got a name I thought sounded cool lmao
Castys: Once upon a time I was watching a playthrough of Night in the Woods and there was a constellation in it named Castys and I was like “hey I like that name. snatched” and that was that.
Erebus: (he’ll be here soon okay) He is named after my favorite volcano which is named after a boat which is named after the greek god of “primordial darkness”. Once again, thought the name sounded cool. That’s all I do
Kage: (no one asked for Kage but I Want) His name means “shadow” in Japanese (and it’s pronounced kah-gay btw). His name was chosen partially because, once again, my weeb ass thought it sounded cool, and partially to contrast his caretaker, Hikari (her name means “light” in Japanese aren’t I creative). My oldest OCs have the shared trait of names that are just Japanese words because I’m uncreative :)
For Einn:
😃What’s the meaning of their name? How/why did you pick it?
“Einn” means “alone” in Icelandic. Because she is lonely. For Reasons. she also has like 4 different names cuz she changes it every so often :)
😇What’s a line they won’t cross?
what line wont I cross is the better question Nothing sexy will be done! Like she’ll touch most of him but nothing that goes into nsfw territory. Partially because it doesn’t line up with her objective, partially because she doesn’t want to at all (Jairus is still kind of a child in her eyes), and partially because I myself Cannot write that kind of shit.
Also she won’t [REDACTED] because that would defeat the point as well :)
There wasn’t always a fake rescue but when I had the idea I was like YES. It’s just fun because I never rescue may characters so this is a good way to write a rescue but not actually have the character get rescued. Especially since Jairus won’t get rescued for a phat minute (sorry y’all)
I DID NOT intend for it to be as whumpy/sus as it turned out to be. While I was writing it though I had no motivation because I either want to write whump or bizarre weird shit. Not comfort. So I just kept. Puttin in lil whumpy bits. But I think it works it’s not obvious that it’s an illusion but you can tell somethin ain’t quite right. Which is prolly for the best cuz I think even Jairus could tell something was off, albeit subconsciously.
Also it was a great way for me to shove backstory down everyone’s throats in a natural sort of manner. It’s always hard for me to work that shit in, but Elitar yelling at Jairus for his actions allowed her to just list them! And it made sense for her to do it that way! (I hope)
I had fun with it though, just seeing how many little hints I could drop and how many things I could make painful. I recommend this exercise to all parties, see how YOUR children react to having their hope ripped away from them :)
Oh and why is his mouth stitched shut? I don’t want to deal with him talking in the next installment. So I shut him up. Also it is a fun troupe.
I will leave y’all with a little lore nugget: Einn did a pretty decent job of imitating Elitar, good enough to not make Jairus outwardly suspicious. How is she able to do this?
