As someone who has struggled with their own unfinished WIPs for years, I'm sad about Empires Ransom, but I'm not judging you for it or damading anything. But can I ask respectfully, would you tell us your plan for what happens with the Tiralls, specifically Arcann? I've always struggled to come up with a decent reunion scene for Arcann/Thexan. Did you plan for them to be brothers again and live together on Odessan? Thank you for writing what you did with those fics, even if they r never finished
Awww nonny, thank you for this, genuinely xx I don't want to say never ever, because lord knows I've gone back and updated ancient fics before, but at this very current moment in time the spark isn't there. I do feel like, I'd be able to return to it in the future, given that BG3 has renewed my joy in writing again, but obviously I can't give a timeframe on when that might happen so I don't want to break your heart with bad promises
I'm hugging you tightly though
That said, let's strap in for a long LONG breakdown of what was going to happen in the final act of A Tyrant's Atonement (with a few notes about my plans for the Evie/Vaylin fic that would have followed)
Oh boy I just opened the outline document, how the hell was I juggling that many plotlines. Okay this is actually way too much, I'm skipping everyone that isn't directly related to the Tiralls lmfaoooo I have a terminal case of Toomanycharacteritis
Kol'aya and Arcann, as we know, finally hooked up at the end of the last chapter on Rishi, only for her brother to ruin things by calling to say their mother was dying and she was needed back on Ryloth. The two of them travel there together, and Arcann sees a) more of life in the galaxy for normal, every day people as he has on Rishi and Nar Shaddaa these past few months, and b) sees evidence of how long term occupation, brutal regimes, colonialism, slavery etc etc hurts people because we're not done with his Awkward Boy Summer yet. Kol and her family don't get along, as we've previously hinted at. Her mum is cruel to her on her deathbed, and she never gets any sort of closure that she was longing for. As the two of them leave Ryloth, they hear a distress signal from nearby Naboo (because I play a LONG game okay, I introduced Naboo in book one for a reason) and with the Odessen Alliance in tatters because most of their fleet have vanished (Iokath) there's no one in the local area to respond. Kol and Arcann go, and Arcann gets to have a hero moment defending the people and gets mistaken for Thexan (who we know HAS visited Naboo) and goes to Kol and says I think it's time I see my brother, I'm ready
Meanwhile, Vaylin has been having a bad time on Iokath. She and Tahrin have a long overdue sisters confrontation, and Vaylin of course has the same freak out that her brothers had when being confronted with a new sibling, with the added bonus that she's like "oh this is the sister they replaced me with". Vaylin gets away first, lunges back to Zakuul as fast as you can blink, and goes to Atrius and says "I want to get married now, immediately, I need a new family"
So! Now the party chapter in game is STILL a party chapter, but the party is now a WEDDING party. Thexan, seeing the announcements, decides quietly that the time has come for him to step forcibly back into the spotlight because he does not want his baby sister marrying this ass, and makes his way quietly to Zakuul with the intention of breaking up the wedding. Arcann, also seeing the announcements on the holonet, HAS THE SAME THOUGHT
Wedding takes place in a T shaped hall, Vaylin starts walking down the aisle. Queue Arcann and Thexan both bursting in from separate doors basically at the same time to stop the wedding, and both sort of staggering to a halt as they spot each other. This of course distresses Vaylin even more, because even on her!!! wedding!!! which she doesn't really care about because she doesn't love Atrius but it's the principle!!!!! EVEN ON HER WEDDING, they make it all about them instead of about her
She flees to Nathema, where Evie and Asmi et al are already hanging out. There's no Zildrogg storyline in my canon, sorry, but I hate that fucking machine so much. Instead they are working in tandem with Kira and Scourge, searching for the "knife still plunged into the weakly beating heart of the Force" aka they're looking for Valk's original body/Tenebrae, because it is the source of the undeath consuming the planet. Vaylin gets there, does her little break free ritual, she and Evie have significant eye contact and Vaylin goes "why do i keep seeing this weird chic everywhere I go what the fuck". Still enraged at her brothers, she heads off to Odessen, newly empowered, to fuck them over because she's not thinking straight
It takes SEVERAL WEEKS not minutes not hours WEEKS OKAY BIOWARE. THAT'S NOT HOW HYPERSPACE TRAVEL WORKS IN ESTABLISHED CANON. I'M NOT IGNORING 40 YEARS OF CANON BECAUSE IT'D MESS UP YOUR PLOTLINES.
Anyway. It takes several weeks for her to get to Odessen. In the meantime, Arcann and Kol are now on Odessen!! Yay!!! Anya is beside herself with glee at finally getting to meet Uncle Arcann in person, after having haunted him for years through the Force. Arcann begins to find peace again, but Kol is agitated and uncomfortable because as we've established previously, she's bad at saying the L word and fully expects him to leave her at any given moment because she's just a twi'lek, he's an ex-emperor slash prince slash son of the Force and there's no world where they belong together and we know my girl has no self esteem despite having oodles of confidence
Vaylin arrives on Odessen, closely pursued by bear by Evie et al. A battle ensues, nothing as wildly over the top as the Battle of Odessen in game, but a battle nonetheless. Vaylin tries to kidnap Anya and Jaelin, because she WILL be loved and she WILL have family, instead of the weirdly arbitrary choice between Vette and Torian. The confrontation against Vaylin happens on the platform, but Evie distracts her with her presence and her weird little Force trick of mind skimming, followed by a one-two combo by Bejah and Asmi. Bejah, as we have already established, is able to sever the Force in herself and other people, and she cuts Vaylin off so that Valk cannot influence her. Asmi, as we have already established, can shield people and planets while allowing them to remain connected to the Force, so once Bejah severs her and kicks out Valk, Asmi shields her and she is free of Valkorion's poison
Kallathe at this point in more Valk than herself, because as I've used as a metaphor before, he was basically the wasp larva inside the caterpillar, and he's been consuming her from the inside out over time. Kallathe-Valk makes a run for Zakuul, to reimpower Themself using the throne, and Arcann, Thexan and Tahrin follow quickly after. As I said in a post about a month back, Vivaane convinces Arcann to secretly bring her datacron with him
Kol'aya also follow after them, after being unable to tell Arcann she loves him before he heads off to face Certain Doom, and has a Really Bad Day in the endless Zakuul elevator of The Spire, because there's nothing Kol and her claustrophobia hate more than elevators, unless it's elevators actively being bombarded from orbit by the Eternal Fleet, and those elevators are several kilometres long. But she endures the Elevator From Hell, and makes it to the top of The Spire in time to tell him she loves him
Arcann, Thexan and Tahrin face off against Kallathe-Valk on the throne. Vivaane bursts out of the datacron as planned, and tells Tahrin the same line she said way back in chapter three of back one - how do you kill a ghost? with another ghost - and merges her spirit with Valk and forces him to dissipate and rejoin the Force
Ewok party time, woo hoo. the aftermath 2 electric boogaloo. Everyone regroups on Odessen. Kol’aya and Arcann haven’t talked yet but they’re sharing a bed again. Tahrin is in mourning and beside herself, Kallathe is utterly uninterested in remaining with the Alliance and wants to go to Nathema, given that it was the ancestral home of her mother's people. Asmi wants to return to the Republic and rebuild the Jedi. Ellaz has already returned to Coruscant as Senator for Corellia and makes a bid for Supreme Chancellor. Vaylin wakes up to find Evie beside her bed.
Kol and Arcann talk. She struggles with the L word but he says it’s okay.
Long term plans: A Daughter's Defiance! Evie and Vaylin fic would've been about Valk's extra backup plans. I would've rewritten Nathema to be just his original Tenebrae body, no Zildrogg at all. Hate that fucking robot so much. Evie's mind skimming/skipping powers come in handy when they find Kira and Scourge unconscious over the sacrophagus, because she can skip into their dream states to learn what's going on. She tries to convince the others that she should be the one to go in because of her specific powers, rationalising that she is best placed to resist the corruption of the dreams. Everyone tells her not to be stupid, she does it anyway, and then Vaylin finds that she has a connection to Evie from the Battle of Odessen when Evie's presence was the last thing in her mind before the severing, and can communicate with her in the dreams. Over time, as the corruption eats away at Evie, it's up to Vaylin to keep her sane while everyone else tries to figure out how to destroy Tenebrae's body once and for all
Thexan and Ona'la and the girls would have moved to Zakuul, acting in a sort of constitutional monarchy position while the planet transitions from a dictatorship to something more sustainable long term. They have a third child, a son named Kiron (after Kira and Theron, in the twi'lek tradition)
Arcann and Kol'aya go back to Rishi at least for a few years, because he still needs time away from power and the spotlight and they need time to work out their relationship away from mostly prying eyes. They eventually have a son whose name I cannot find anywhere in my notes
Kallathe and Lana get married on Nathema, which Kallathe has latched onto quite hard in the aftermath of all the trauma of Valk and has decided this is Her Planet. This is where Her People were from, it's a Red Sith Planet and it's hers. Hasn't exactly declared herself Empress but she's gonna be a thorn in Acina's side for a long time.
God that's so long. Does that cover everything? That's not even a quarter of the characters in the cast, jesus christ. Please feel absolutely free to ask me any further questions nonny, I did have a lot of fun going over my notes to write this, and this is frankly only a fraction of it all. I do really appreciate your lovely message, and I'm glad that Empire's Ransom meant as much to you as it did to me. One day it'll get an update, I'm sure of it xxx















