Last night I read Let Me Name The Stars For You from start to finish. It is such an ambitious story! You did a wonderful job and I wanted to thank you for putting so much thought and effort into writing what ended up being a gripping &emotional story. You mention in the story Richie's new habit of talking to himself& I have been wondering what that sounds like! Are his thoughts written outside of quotation marks sometimes spoken aloud? Your writing is very good I hope it brings you joy!
oh my god wow thank you so much!!! this means so much to me i’m so glad you enjoyed it<3
with richie talking to himself, it depends on who’s pov i’m writing from for how it comes across. if it’s in richie’s pov then yes, sometimes the thoughts he has to himself are actually spoken out loud. he grows more aware of it the longer he’s back around people but it is something he has to relearn to keep private!
thank you again!!!
