Hi! We were wondering if you wouldn't mind taking some time to give us an opinion. Thank you so much and have a nice day!
Sure thing love! Under the cut is Destructa X’s opinion of gemrp! Please remember this is my personal opinion and is only meant to help!
Theme: 8/10
Everything is nice and laid out. I personally don’t care for boxed themes, they are harder to scroll through and use, however, I know they are very popular right now and that’s like a personal preference. I would also use your extra links on the top for “rules”, “plot” or “characters” not “male” and “female”. You can always link to the characters on the nav page, because people *usually* want to know what they’re getting themselves into first.
Plot: 9/10
Really interesting idea! I’m guessing you’re gonna only have 12 characters and then the teachers? I really like the concept! It reminds me of the Marvel comic books “Runaways”. It’s structured and left open just enough.
Characters: 5/10
This is the tricky part with any kind of #x# RP. You want to make sure you’re open to all kinds of characters and that’s going to include all genders and sexualities. By having a set number of male and female it sort of gives off the idea that you’d like all heterosexual pairings and closes the door to non-binary characters. My suggestion would be possibly make the group totally OC with no restrictions on gender, that’s the best way to make it the most inclusive.
Navigation: 9/10
Your navigation page is great and has good resources on it to help the roleplayers. I’m not really sure how you’re going to be using the World Map, but it sure looks cool! I’d also suggest putting a little description on the locations in “The Mansion” section so people know what’s up.
Overall: 7/10
Really the only fix I’d suggest would be the characters. It’s really hard because I see that you want certain “personalities” for the characters and I get that. I’d suggest, maybe, just listing all those, but don’t restrict that to a gender. Let the player pick the personality and then chose the gender.
fr i love the theme that ur using but ur graphics are a little?? like idk i don’t like the texture u have on them or else i would totally be down for this rp. the plot seems alright like with the experiment and the time travel thing idk this is defs a rec i think it would be pretty cool. 8/10
Hey Hallie! We're a new roleplay in the tags and were wondering if you wouldn't mind giving us an opinion. Thank you for your time!
Y’all sure can! All I can think of from the URL is like some kind of old timey RP? I don’t know why. But hey, the first post I see is talking about a time travel event. Dang, I’m already pretty interested. The plot is super hella interesting, like??? Kudos to y’all for that! And I love the character pages so much. They just look so nice, I don’t even know… Just the graphics in general are pretty solid, like, I really like them! The rules are fine and I really like how y’all linked to starter masterlists in case people were having trouble. That’s pretty awesome. I think the app is the perfect length and y’all aren’t asking for too much! The travel map is pretty awesome and I hope you guys add things to it in the future? But one thing I would change, if possible, is on the navigation page, all the links look really blurry? I don’t know if that’s the right word but they just look odd to me and hurt my eyes. I see this having a lot of potential so I’m gonna rec it! I wish y’all the best of luck!