Which comic do you think has the best writing of Mai and which comic do you think has the worst writing of her?
Here's our competitors:
Going Home Again
The Ember Island Arcade
The Promise, Parts 1/2
Rebound
Smoke & Shadow, Parts 1-3
Ashes of the Academy
That's not a lot (despite the Maiko Breakup Subplot going on for 14 years at this point), so we can discuss them individually and even rank them if we want.
Going Home Again is a solid depiction of Mai, as expected by something made by the actual show creators. It's a very nice showcase of how she starts her relationship with Zuko, capturing her personality and showing us a fun side with the encounter with Jin. It also solidifies her lack of jealousy, something implied by 'The Beach' but easy to miss given how passive a character she usually is. However, I do have one complaint: there's a line of dialogue that says Mai used to throw mud at Zuko as an expression of her crush. That feels stereotypical and out of character for Mai, at least to me, who is at her most expressive in the entire franchise when getting the heebie-jeebies at the sight of Ty Lee jumping into slurry. But it's a minor point.
The Ember Island Arcade barely has any Mai in it, but the depiction is fine. Her snark is a highlight of this thing.
The Promise isn't actually a bad depiction of her. In fact, she might be the best, most in-character player in the entire trilogy. Sadly, she doesn't get a lot to do here. She worries about Zuko when he's looking unhealthy and gets upset when she learns that he's hiding his entire life from her, both perfectly reasonable reactions to how badly Zuko is being written. She solves the security problem with the help of her Kyoshi Warrior friends in what might be the most triumphant moment of the entire trilogy (and yes, I'm including when the stupid war is stupidly averted in the stupid final comic and stupid Aang and Zuko become stupid friends again). Then she leaves when she finds out that Zuko is still being written stupidly (which is very different than being written as stupid) in an excellent display of self-respect. Mai is effectively the only character being written with a brain, so of course she has to barely appear or she might solve all the problems in the first comic.
Rebound is also a pretty good depiction. The plotline with her father is very rushed and feels like there's a piece of the story missing as a result, but it does a good job at capturing how she believes in what Zuko is doing as Fire Lord apart from their romance. It also has Kei Lo falling in love with her after a single date, so there's a clear understanding from the storytellers that Mai is canonically the character with the most rizz in the entire franchise.
Smoke & Shadow, unfortunately, is where things fall apart. Mai is a starring player, so she can't be depicted as in-character or she'll ruin Gene Yang's latest contrived, under-baked plot. I do not buy the irrationality she displays at Tom-Tom's kidnapping, especially compared to her depiction in 'Return to Omashu', and 'Rebound' makes it seem unlikely that she would have any regard for her father. They put another girl in a Mai wig for this comic and forced her to slander the real Mai.
Ashes of the Academy is, despite its under-baked plot, a great depiction of Mai. I admit, I hadn't seen her as a bug-lover before this, as bugs are found outside and so is mud, but she keeps her bugs in a terrarium in this so there's no attempt to claim she's the outdoorsy type. I have my issues with the depiction of Mai's father here (I think, given what Mai said in 'The Beach,' that he's less likely to tell her to befriend Azula and more likely to tell her to keep her head down and not draw attention to herself), but Lil'Mai make sense as an extrapolation from her older self and what we saw in 'Zuko Alone,' and the adult Mai builds on what we depicted in 'Rebound' to show that she believes in the Fire Nation being built by Zuko, and the comic even successfully connects that to her experiences as a kid. I know there's some quibbling about how Mai doesn't bring her knives to school and whether that's in-character, but I can see her wanting so much to be a good teacher that she eschews her knives despite not being comfortable with it. It's not her getting soft, it's her overcompensating for the difficulties she had with the academy.
So here's our ranking:
Ashes of the Academy
Rebound
The Promise, Parts 1/2
Going Home Again
The Ember Island Arcade
Smoke & Shadow, Parts 1-3
Let the controversy begin!










