I've finally managed to get chapter one to a readable level. It's not finished quite yet. I've got another few thousand words to write about Madara's subsequent reaction and freak out. But yknow. I'm proud! So, here's an extract of chapter 1 to celebrate.
“Is it that you do not want me?”
“Irrelevant.” Definitely more lucid.
“Alpha.”
Kunai — no sword to the gut. Fuck. Madara almost pinned him down and—
Fuck. Fuck. Madara let go of his hair; too much of a handhold. Now that he knew how it felt in his hand — he'd have the cursed dream, wouldn't he?
“That is relevant, though.” Hashirama stared at him and fuck, where were their fear of genjutsu; why did they insist on meeting his eyes? Hashirama always had, yes, but at least Tobirama usually avoided it!
Hashirama moved closer, close enough for their knees to touch. An arm around Tobirama's torso pulled him carefully against his chest. The man went easily.
With Tobirama's hands still tangled in his hair and legs wrapped around his waist, Madara followed the movement, rising forward on his knees with a curse. His hand landed on the futon to stop him from crashing onto them, the other wrapping around Tobirama's fever-warm thigh.
Tobirama tilted back his head on Hashirama's shoulder, dropping his arms by his sides. One of his hands landed on Madara's. Hashirama slid his down to cover the one on Tobirama's thigh.
Their faces stayed breaths apart as they breathed the same air. Their eyes bore into his. The scents drove him half mad, Tobirama and — Hashirama's.
Arousal.
Warm wood with an almost caramelised scent.
His breath caught in his chest as he stopped breathing entirely. Tobirama panted, his eyes closing, neck tilted back just begging to be claimed. Hashirama's lips parted, eyes half-lidded, looking at him through long lashes.
Madara warred with himself to not activate his sharingan and preserve the memory of it.
The thighs firmly wrapped around his waist, Hashirama being so close, holding Tobirama up. Their hands on his. This position. Madara could fuck him just like this, could make Tobirama cry his name in his brother's arms.
“Do you want him?”
How could he not?









