🌹 - is your character quick to fall in love or slow? do they deny their feelings or are they open and honest?
Gorsefang falls in love slowly! I mean, they did end up with Burnetpelt pretty early on in their life, yeah, but Burnetpelt was Gorsefang's best friend. They fell for him slowly, and they also hid their feelings -- they're a naturally stoic person who bottles up their feelings, so Burnetpelt kinda had to be the one to confess HFBHDFS but yeah! Slow to fall but they do fall hard, to the point that Gorsefang might not ever look for or be open to another romance beyond Burnetpelt.
💥 - does your character have any habits that impact them negatively?
i think you and i both know that answer
but SERIOUSLY yes they do >^<!! They're already a pretty emotionally stunted and unavailable person, ever since witnessing the death of their father as a kit. They're quiet, reserved, and most of their emotions are dealt with and bottled up privately until Gorsefang hits a limit and breaks. RiverClan is well aware of Gorsefang's outbursts under intense grief, especially after Burnetpelt's death, and they can be gruff, stand offish, and have grown reclusive from RiverClan as a whole besides Hollypaw and a select few cats. They isolate themself and struggle to deal with their emotions and uhhhh............ Snowstar in general is their bad habit. Just Snowstar as a whole person HFSDBHCD
That being said, Gorsefang isn't malicious in their habits! They don't do anything under the intention of hurting cats or anyone else around them, ever. They're unfortunately overprotective of Hollypaw after witnessing horrific events/losses and socially stunted. Snowstar was the first cat to reach out to them in their grief, too, and she is well aware of how she's taking advantage of them.
Who’s hollyclouds dad >:) & would he have been nice to her/changed his kids lives if he was alive?
holly uses he/him btw :3 but hollyclouds dad is burnetpelt! he wouldve been very good to both holly and gorse ! he was a very loving and warm-hearted tom, whose time came to a very tragically short end. he would’ve been an excellent father and loving mate to gorsefang though!
there was actually a scene i had planned in the comic that was probably one of the top 10 or 5 scenes i was looking forward to drawing! but it was gorsefang and burnetpelt reuniting briefly in a dreamscape :’) <3
oooh can you go into what your plan was for the story of snowstar's supporters who lived? i'm especially curious about acornbee, since her connection to snowstar made me realize that you don't often see villains such as snowstar who have a healthy romantic relationship with someone. (it at least appeared healthy in the comic!)
EEP THANK YOU it was intended to be a healthy relationship! OR WELL I’m not sure if it would be healthy truly considering Acornbee did like, enable Snowstar a lot, and they were two toxic people placed together, but I did want to portray in the comic that they did genuinely both love each other. They loved each other and they actually would have been pretty decent parents to their kits had they stayed around (but that doesn’t change the fact that Acornbee straight up abandoned them sooo... no matter how many ifs or buts they aren’t good people for sure) but that was an intentional thing! I wanted my villains to be rounded, so while they weren’t good people at all, they still had some interesting qualities that balanced them out, you know? Not pure evil, but just because they had the capability of doing nice things from time to time that did not justify or excuse at all what they did.
As for the villains and supporters!! I’ll do a brief little list right here under the cut :>!!
Acornbee - Touched upon it a bit already, but essentially she would try to kill Minkstar as an act of revenge and when that failed, she would have run away from the territories and never returned. Her kittens would be taken in by Minkstar and Blackcloud to raise instead, and Acornbee would essentially just fall off the radar, living the rest of her days as a loner.
Copperclaw & Gorsefang - While not necessarily villains, I do consider these two antagonists in the comic because they do support Snowstar at first! They’re separated from the rest of the villain cast though because they weren’t really doing this of their own free will; at first they looked up to and admired Snowstar, but later they began to realize she was wrong and doing horrible things, but at that time Snowstar began threatening the lives of Hollycloud and Emberstorm so neither Gorsefang nor Copperclaw felt safe enough to rebel against her. Gorsefang would end up being spurred into action against Snowstar by Blackcloud’s support and comfort and would end up killing Raintail -- the tom who had the final killing blow on Burnetpelt, as well as executed Antfoot, and also was friends with Elmfoot. Copperclaw would end up tackling her sister Emberstorm during the final confrontation to beg her to stop fighting and then would run off once she realized Emberstorm was fighting against Snowstar. Copperclaw was very young and manipulated by Snowstar so she was very conflicted, scared, and confused over what happened; she spent a few moons away from RiverClan but came back around before the third moon arrived. Minkstar takes her back in and Copperclaw works to rebuild her standing in RiverClan, whereas Gorsefang stayed the entire time and spent that time also working to rebuild their standing in RiverClan. Gorsefang and Chubstream would actually end up finding love with each other too and they’d become romantic partners :>
Raintail, Toadtail, Elmfoot, Commapelt, Sandwhisker, Harrierheart & Loachpelt - Grouping them all together since they’re supporting villains/back-up villains. Raintail would be killed off by Gorsefang in the final battle; Toadtail would be killed off by Owlfoot in the final battle; Elmfoot is killed off by Otterflower and Hollycloud in the final battle; Commapelt runs away after the deaths of Laurelstar and Snowstar, as well as the retreat of Yellowstar; Sandwhisker is killed by Roseface in the final battle; Harrierheart runs away permantly from the territories like Commapelt; Loachpelt is killed by Nightthroat when he and Batfoot stage a rescue mission to save Vervainstripe from being held as ThunderClan’s prisoner.
Laurelstar & Whimbrelthroat - Together since they’re ThunderClan’s baddies. Essentially, Laurelstar would be cornered and killed off by Lionstorm after confessing she was in on the whole thing during the final battle. Whimbrelthroat would track down Vervainstripe in the middle of the final battle and attempt to kill him off, but Whinchatwhisker would rescue him and kill Whimbrelthroat instead, taking out years of pent up rage and resentment out on her sister who was at the source for all of it. There’s an old doodle on here of Vervainstripe staring in shock with a blood splatter across his face which is specifically referencing this scene of Whinchatwhisker rescuing him from Whimbrelthroat.
Yellowstar & Redflower - After like, ages of being horrible, Yellowstar and Redflower get their comeuppance. Redflower is cornered by Vervainstripe and Nightthroat and attacked pretty badly by the both of them (though it’s not,, uncalled for considering Redflower literally uh tortured Vervainstripe :| ) and Redflower retreats, badly wounded but alive. Yellowstar also ends up retreating from final battle alongside Redflower. There’s some details provided in the screenshot below but as an abridged version: basically, she and Redflower have kits for the sole purpose of carrying on Aspenstar’s lineage. Redflower succumbs to his injuries soon after and Yellowstar still isn’t being treated for her wounds; she ends up having her kits and they get taken to RiverClan much to her hatred. She confronts Roseface again (which, fun fact btw: she and Sandwhisker are the ones who ripped out his eye so by this time in the timeline he has scars just like Minkclaw’s -- which pissed yellowstar off MORE), they have a fight, and Yellowstar ends up dying of her wounds alone and stranded from the Clans.
So, basically, a lot of the supporting cast antagonists do actually die, just not all right away !
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Warriors - Erin Hunter
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Original Female Character(s), Original Non-Binary Character
Additional Tags: Beta Read, another short drabble!, specifically written to emulate the style of the canon prologues :)
Summary:
“Well, then,” she swept her silky tail, a pristine solid color, across the soft earth of the bank just beside her, an invitation Gorsefang seemed hesitant to jump to, “come sit with me.”
Gorsefang remained where they stood, rigid as the great willow trunks they had climbed as an apprentice. The molly’s smile fell.
“Come now, Gorsefang. Aren’t we friends? Sit.” Phrased as an invitation, but her tone read as a command. Gorsefang always followed orders.
