Feedback and Illustrators Wanted!
https://www.wattpad.com/303671458-the-hybrid-prophecy-high-rise
That's the first chapter of my story. It's about 4K words and I already have the next 25K words written, now I'm just editing them to them it more readable. I haven't finished the story yet so it'll be a long one and hopefully worth the long read!
Writers; any comments that you can message me that'll be brilliant and well appreciated. Seriously, go to town. I want as much feedback as possible. Good / Bad. Even if you don't know much about writing fiction I'll still appreciate your help.
Illustrators; As you can see from the front cover, it's poorly designed. Absolutely dreadful and crappy. I can't pay you but if you can come up with something awesome I'll happily give you credit and maybe we can work together in the future as I do intend on publishing something professionally one day.
So basically I'm thinking on having the front cover being just the main character at the beginning as the front cover but it'll be really cool if it can be done creatively. Maybe drawn a girl (Must be bright haired, pale, brown eyes) looking kinda young and innocent on the left side of her face (Maybe emo eye-liner/pierces? Maybe freckled? Idk, I can incorporate that sort of stuff if you think it looks best) and on the other half being slightly more matured? Maybe a few scars? (please don't do the over-done cut on the eye, you know what I'm talking about.) Basically at the beginning of the story she will be innocent and at the end she'll be messed up and scarred but over all, terrifying. I want to really play with character developement so she'll start being innocent and shaky but end up being an unbelieveable force of power. She is a goody however I intend on writing it so the reader will question who's side she's on. etc.
Alternatively. You can drawn half her face and your interpretation of the 'animal' she becomes. Be clear whether you're drawing it from either her when she was more innocent and scared or from a more mature, terrifying perspective. Both are good but you're choice. I'll accept all work that is related to my work. I didn't just want to google 'red head' and just use the picture of some random girl as my cover. Please don't do the same.
If you need more details on the character or the other characters if you want to do a different cover or if you want to know more about their seperate powers/transformations/anything else you can think of, please message me for more details.