Seven Day Intro to WIP challenge: “Us and the Stars”
Day 7: Favorite scene/thing to write emotionally charged scenes, vulnerability
Overall, I love writing intense, emotionally-charged scenes that force the characters to be vulnerable.
Aaron breathes a quiet sigh. “I guess I’m just not over the fact that, when I thought you weren’t real, you were still the only person I gave a shit about outside of Marcie. I couldn’t…” He pauses, grappling for the right words. “I couldn’t love my own daughter’s mother. But – “
There’s a tense pause as the two of them wait for the other to speak.
“—but you loved me,” Miguel finishes quietly.
And, even though it’s painful to write, the scene where they have to rush Marcie to the hospital was intense and challenging (tw for child illness)
“We’re gonna go back to the car, okay sweetie?” Miguel and Aaron stand abruptly as Marceline attempts to do the same. She stands on her feet for no more than three seconds before she whimpers softly. She wavers on unsteady feet for a moment before tipping over with a choked cry. Miguel just barely catches her as she falls, his back twinging as he hisses in pain through his teeth. Unable to support her weight, his knees buckle. Aaron’s feet slide out from under him as he dives to support Miguel, kneeling on the ground. The piercing pain in his back is enough to make his vision spotty as he groans involuntarily, squeezing his eyes shut.
Overall, I love anything that has to do with emotional intensity. It’s so much fun exploring the different dynamics and seeing how the characters react to vulnerability and stress.
this took me longer than seven days but i’m so glad I did all seven!
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