jabonbons replied to your post “Changing Hearts, Colepaldi Fic”
I've read it and I like it ! Your style is smooth and enjoyable (I think a few commas are missing but no big deal). I'm looking forward to the next chapters, you can't leave Peter startled like that :c Thank you for writing this fanfic !! <3<3
Thank you for this comment (yay, I can finally reply to comments again!!!). Commas are often a problem for Germans because we use them literally everywhere in German and when I write and proofread my English fics (I’m not a native speaker) I tend to delete half of them cause I feel they are redundant XD I should probably look up the rules at some point.
But I’m glad you’ve enjoyed the first chapter so far and yep, that was on hell of a shock for Peter. It’s gonna take him a few chapters to recover ;)

















