First Lines meme RULES: List the first lines of your last 20 stories. See if there are any patterns. Then tag your favorite authors.
Hat tip to @theanishimori
1. The Problem With Children (Person of Interest - Rinch WIP)
The harsh mechanical buzz and whir jolted John awake.
2. Domestic Stability (Person of Interest - Rinch)
“Honestly, Nathan, we built the dammed thing!”
3. Acceptance (Person of Interest - Shoot) Shaw shivered herself awake.
4. Reverence (Person of Interest - Root and The Machine)
Even with the blonde wig, it only takes .0000067 seconds to identify the Analog Interface.
5. Keep it All the Year (Person of Interest - Rinch)
John's footsteps were muffled in the deep carpet pile.
6. The Heart That Loved (Person of Interest - Shoot, Team Machine)
With the Machine's voice in her head silenced, Root's autonomic system took over. She shouldered the submachine gun and blasted her way into the uncertain: John at her side, Harold and his precious cargo shielded behind.
7. Life Obliges (Person of Interest - Harold/Grace)
A soft series of beeps signaled the end of the test. Harold glanced down at his watch, then rose to join Nathan across the room in front of the machine.
8. Welcome to the Club (Person of Interest - Gen, Choose Your Own Adventure)
You hate this job.
9. I Found a Million Dollar Baby (in a Five and Ten Cent Store) (Person of Interest - Rinch)
Nat King Cole, vinyl from Harold’s collection, played softly from the living room.
10. Sutton Place (Person of Interest - Rinch)
John came to strapped to a metal chair in Garcetti's dim warehouse basement.
11. Jigsaw Falling Into Place (Person of Interest - Rinch WIP)
The tall man cut an impressive figure on his run through the park.
12. Does It Lessen Your Affection? (Person of Interest - Shoot)
The three of them ascended from the subway station to the biting cold above.
13. Move The Slow Hand (Person of Interest - Rinch)
John tightened the zip tie around Nakagawa's wrists, then, confident that the unconscious man was secure, he propped the crooked investment banker against the office wall next to his equally comatose bodyguard.
14. Discretion (Person of Interest - Rinch)
The Library isn't safe anymore, Harold. Get out.
John grabbed his bag. Harold erased.
15. Fumbling Towards (Person of Interest - Rinch)
The headlights cut through the wooded and winding, deep black of the Teconic State Parkway.
16. Practice Makes Perfect (Person of Interest - Rinch)
Harold Finch, president of the George Washington Carver High School Science Club, glanced up at the wall clock with a frown and then back to the two girls sitting across the table from him and sighed.
17. Both Reasonable and Belonging (Person of Interest - Harold/Nathan)
“Nathan? What is this?”
18. Little by Little (Person of Interest - Rinch)
The weather had grown milder over the past few weeks, enough so that they walked to work that morning.
19. Float (Person of Interest - Harold/Nathan)
Nathan's Mercedes was parked in the driveway along with the other guests cars.
20. Are You Busy? (Person of Interest - Harold/Grace)
- Whipped cream and Hershey's syrup.
--- Cliche. Use your imagination
Trends - I’m aware that I tend to write in images, that I like showing, showing, showing. Looking over these lines I can still see the opening visual I had in mind for most of them.
I am mildly surprised to see that Harold, with Nathan or Grace, accounts for most of the dialogue starting fic on this list. That fits in with how I imagine his relationship with those two, more verbal. With Reese, I see the relationship as being more internal, neither of them being very good at using their words.
Finally, there was a real frustration in doing this meme. I am a forever editor. A few of this lines were unsatisfying to my ear or eye when I wrote them and still are. One glaring example is the stupid opening paragraph of Does It Lessen Your Affection? I don’t think that was as successful a written translation of the image in my mind as some other, and it always bugs me. On the flip side, I think I nailed a lot of my mind visuals in that fic, so it mostly balances out.
If you’d like to do the meme, consider yourself tagged!