Ok but this chapter of Loyalty was really great!!! And no penises! I really love your Katniss; you write her so well and I can identify with her and i love it
I mean, if your criteria for a good chapter is that it has no penises, your priorities might be a little off. (And there was only one obvious mention of it and he was still clothed at the time, so that really should not be that disturbing. I do try to be sensitive to the fact that us Joniss shippers are mostly a bunch of lesbos [me included].)
But thanks. I identify with many aspects of both of them in this fic, and in general, so that makes them easy (or at least natural) to write.













