baekhyun forces your eyes to his hands every time you look away. his pretty fingers slide in and out of you, rings brushing your lips as he buries his fingers deep into your pussy. face serious, he presses the cold metal of his thumb ring into your clit. you whine and let your head fall back—so he stops. "eyes here, baby, or i stop. now be a good girl and watch me make you cum with just my fingers."
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Chapters: 5/?
Fandom: 방탄소년단 | Bangtan Boys | BTS
Rating: Mature
Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Kim Namjoon | RM/Original Female Character(s), Park Jimin (BTS)/Original Female Character(s), Park Jimin (BTS)/Reader, Kim Namjoon | RM/Reader, Kim Namjoon | RM & Reader, Park Jimin (BTS) & Reader
Characters: Kim Namjoon | RM, Park Jimin (BTS), Min Yoongi | Suga, Jung Hoseok | J-Hope, Kim Taehyung | V, Jeon Jungkook, Kim Seokjin | Jin, Reader, Original Female Character(s)
Additional Tags: Smut, Fluff and Angst, Sad with a Happy Ending, Angst and Tragedy, Love, Love Confessions, Falling In Love, Romance, Alternate Universe - College/University, Established Relationship, Alternate Universe, Fluff
Summary:
You had everything you thought you could ever want or need. You loved every moment of your life, your career, family, friends and most of all the light of your life your husband, Namjoon.
Until a reckless mistake sealed your fate.
Going through the motions of loss; the riptide of grief takes you and is pulling at your seams. Can you move forward and find happiness once again?
“I love you Ava, you are my world, you make up all of the brightest stars in my constellation.”
first of all, I don’t think I have read anything with this pairing a Namjoon x OC/Reader x Jimin story so I was delighted as soon as I saw the relationships info on ao3, the only confusing thing for me was immersing into a named reader (y’all know I’m all for immersion) because it’s always strictly second person pov/y/n or third person pov/named oc that I’m used to but after a while, I got used to it and enjoyed reading the story.
[SPOILERS AHEAD - very minimal since this is an on-going story.]
this is a very interesting story, I thought it would be easy to predict what happens next but I’m actually having a hard time thinking of all the possibilities since this is an on-going story, starting off with Namjoon and Ava talking about constellations, a secret the adorable husband can’t keep, the things they’d do once they get to Australia, the veil of love and lust consuming them because they were so happy sigh honestly I heard my heart shattered when Joon said the name Ava because I thought he was cheating but turns out it was a named reader, I had to pause and re-read over and over because again this was something new to me after accepting and immersing into the story with a different name it actually had my heart fluttering once again recalling their unspoken words, their conversation in the car, the way they show their love through actions and words were beautiful until everything came crashing down, that’s when I finally realized that this will indeed be tragic as stated on the tags.
the flashbacks are very important in establishing how the couple met and how they were as lovers before getting married, this is also where we finally meet every other character that adds life to the story from Min who is very charming and knows what she wants, ugh I utterly adore her cute story with Taehyung, it really is true that when two people are meant to be together they’ll find a way back to each other, Taehyung (or Min’s boyfriend) is taking up media studies with Jungkook, Seokjin, of course, the handsome chaebol who has everything one could wish for, Yoongi and Hoseok, or the lovers who have different personalities but still bring out the best in each other and Jimin the professional dancer who made Ava realize her that she still has passion for dancing. honestly, I’m still clueless on how Jimin will enter the picture will he remain as a friend with unrequited feelings (we still haven’t established tho how he truly feels for Ava), will something blossom between him and Ava while they spend more time with each other, will he enter the picture during the present day where she will need her friends to support her now that Namjoon is most probably in critical condition (not to mention we still don’t know whether or not she is pregnant), I like that there are so many possibilities and with the transition from present to past to present makes me lose my mind in a good way because it makes the story worth investing time in.
I am looking forward to the future chapters of this story, I love how my heart has been played with way too many times from the named reader to the tragic accident, the flashbacks etc., the characterization is lovely and I wanna get to know them more, the details of the story, it’s one of the things I like about your writing (A++ to the smutty parts of the story because ngl I live for dom!Namjoon, well-written *standing ovation with flying kisses*) the air of mystery in every chapter because I wanna know what happened to them but I’m scared like what if Namjoon ends up in a coma or what if he suffers from amnesia? what if Ava is really pregnant? what if she gets devastated from whatever condition Namjoon is in and her vulnerability gets used against her but I doubt that scratching that idea rn~ but that’s just me and my imagination trying to appease my restless self while I wait for the next chapters.
anyways, thank you @kathkeatz-blog for sharing your story with us, these are my thoughts as a reader, I hope more people get to read your Then There Was You so they’d understand my excitement for the future of this story! | 🍒🍒🍒🍒🍒
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: 방탄소년단 | Bangtan Boys | BTS
Rating: Explicit
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Park Jimin/Reader, Park Jimin/Original Female Character(s)
Characters: Park Jimin (BTS), Reader, You
Additional Tags: Blasphemy, Eventual Smut, Priest Kink, Priests, Smut
Summary:
There is a charm about the forbidden that makes it unspeakably desirable. -Mark Twain
Matthew 26:41 | “Watch and pray so that you will not fall into temptation. The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak.”
I think I have developed a priest kink for Park Jimin at this point, I've read one before and it is also sinfully good, I gotta say the summary “There is a charm about the forbidden that makes it unspeakably desireable” - Mark Twain is accurate af, if you fail to sin yourself while reading then there must be something wrong or maybe nothing is wrong because to each their own, anyway, if this isn’t your cup of tea I suggest you skip this one but if you’re open then go ahead and bask into this well-written story that proves the flesh is weak.
[SPOILERS AHEAD]
now this is mostly in Jimin’s perspective as a priest on how hard he fought not to give in to the desires of his weak flesh, from the moment he laid eyes on her he was already lured into Satan’s trap, she may look like an angel but she reeks of temptation, luring the poor priest into allowing unholy thoughts brew in his mind. this focuses on about 3/4 of Jimin’s struggle and fight against his carnal desires, it doesn’t help at all that she’s so innocent and always kind towards him which makes him weak because part of him aches to dominate her, he shouldn’t think of dirty thoughts but he’s only human, a mortal capable of committing sins even if he already committed himself into serving and giving his life to God. this might feel a little dragging to some but we got to remember their roles in the catholic community and the holy house they live in, fast forward to a few events to the beach where his lust grew tenfold, the confession that made him want to know more about her own secrets, her clandestine dreams she carefully shared as guilt was equally eating her away.
all prayers are heard, right? but what if one night the Lord decided to test you and let you use your own will to do what is right but ended up doing what feels right? Jimin, his words, his pleas, his prayers falling from his lips were useless he was like a madman going crazy because his thoughts were wrong, she should’ve been nothing but his child, a child he should be protecting and nurturing with God’s words and love, but instead Satan won and placed them inside the Chapel to mock the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit, Jimin turned into a man possessed with want begging for the truth, begging for him to be the one and when she ultimately gave in to confessing to the Father of her unholy dreams and lust just like that Jimin gave in to the pleas of their flesh, he drank every part of her (not spoiling all the smutty goodness *wink*wink*), the sacrilegious and sinful smut here is something you should read with feels and use your head to imagine the perfect altar fucking scenario, what they did was wrong on all levels but it hurt to see them fall for each other even if most of what provoked them was their lust, they are clearly whipped and would want a normal life, maybe have her as his wife and have kids of their own but not in this one, for she was a temptress and he made a vow to serve God all his life, maybe this was just a taste of what could’ve been although we don’t know what happens after the betrayal he’s done to the Lord, he may keep going and keep on sinning or repent for his sins all his life. | 🍒🍒🍒🍒🍒
junmyeon smiles at you over his wine as his fingers dance past the slit in your dress, closer and closer to your core with every circle. "keep your eyes on the party," he whispers, under the pretence of brushing a strand of hair from your neck. "if anyone sees, i'll stop."
you only nod, smiling along as his hand slips to your covered clit, hiding your whimpers in your wine as he gets started.
jongdae gives you his cat grin as your whole body jerks. you would twist away from his fingers but he doesn’t give you the chance. “aw, no patience left? you want to cum?” he grinds your clit with his thumb and laughs when you whine. “my baby wants to cum so bad, don’t you?” you nod, pouting as if that would sway him. he slides another finger into your pussy, so loose from his working it just takes it. “you’ll have to wait a little more for that, baby. i’ve got all day.”
