*I received an advance reader copy of this book in exchange for an honest review*
Blurb: Neely has always been able to see things — the details others miss, flashes of color that tell her how people feel, and more. She's been called everything from witch to psychic to freak. But a lifetime of seeing what the rest of the world misses still didn't prepare her for being taken hostage mid-escape by a man with tentacles. And it definitely didn't prepare her for the intriguing woman who comes to her rescue.
There were definitely good parts to this! I'm always up for a quick wlw read, superheroes are great, and I'm loving the anxious queer girl rep. Also, this book is like 90% female characters and I like that a lot. In that respect, this is a perfectly nice novella. But there were some things on a technical level that detracted from the experience.
The writing could be more polished — it got a bit rough and juvenile sometimes. But I know the version I read is subject to further editing, and on the assumption that the writing will be smoother when it's actually published I've decided to up my rating from 2 to 2.5 to account for that.
The other major problem is that without world building, the story is kind of drifting in nowhere-land. For a while I didn't have a solid sense of whether this was a regular world but with magic/superheroes, a fantasy universe, or somewhat in between. Besides the fact that this world has countries the real world doesn't, the clues about the setting are sparse and vaguely modern day. The set up for the story is utilitarian. Neely tells us immediately and clunkily that everything from arson to murder has been going wrong in this city and then we're off to the inciting incident. Sure, it's all you need to know from a plot standpoint, but it makes you feel stranded and confused as a reader. Perhaps a longer exposition, to meet the world and Neely as a character before the plot started, would have grounded the story.
Anyway, I like that the book really emphasizes recognizing your worth as a person regardless of what that mean little voice in the back of your head says.