Chapter 19 Review
OKAY SO I JUST READ CHAPTER 19 OF @whatwashernameagain 's FANFIC "Keep Him Safe" (PLSPSLPLS GO READ IT IF YOU HAVENT)
And oh
My
Gosh
That was an angst load.
First of all- I have a guess for Romans secret admirer. Im thinking its most likely Deceit- the same guys whos been hella stalking him on instagram. That would be sooo COOL AHHH
But apart from my guess- i an so obssessed with this Roman story line ??? Like I adore this whole situation with Roman's secret admirer getting through to him with his job as a detective?? Like thats soooo wicked cool???? I love it soo much!! The fact he STOLE a CROWN and gave it to Roman (in a way) WAS SO COOL❤ AHH i cannot wait to see what happens with that (and how Virgil and Patton will react to it)
Second of all- THE ANGST WITH VIRGIL. I WANT TO HUG HIM AND NEVER LET HIM GO. I ADORE the platonic family relationship Logan has with Virgil- how Logan kind of steps in as a sort of father figure to him and provides him comfort and wisdom. I love it
And Roman character development man???? Like yes??? Hes continuing to learn how to deal with Virgil- hes learning to trust Logan and others with Virgil. I feel like he used to think only he could deal with him, or at least he only wants himself to deal with Virgil- but hes learning and letting Logan help and Patton help. I LOVE THEM
I feel so bad for Virgil though- like his backstory and everything. Hes always going to have that PTSD of all of that and my boy doesnt deserve it. I wish Hector and Victor werent giant ASSHOLES.
Speaking of Victor being a giant ASSHOLE
Im sO SCARED FOR VIRGIL!!! VICTOR BETTER NOT TOUCH MY BOY OR ILL CRY- ill personally fight victor.
On a different note- i adore how Logan is so protective of all of them. Alot of fanfics lack that- they just focus on their romantic partner. But no- Logan doesnt need to be in a romantic relationship with any of them to feel a strong need to protect them. He cares so much for them- letting them disrupt his calm and organized life. I also love how Logan and Roman value eachother and will always value eachother over their crushes bc they are best friends and share a family-like bond. (I love it sm) ((on a sad...twisted note...it would be terrible to make Logan have to choose between two of them somehow? Like that would tear him apart))
Also- I saw next chapter is gonna involve Patton and IM SO READY BUT SO WORRIED BC THATS MY BOY. It hurt so much how happy, protecting, loving, caring and gentle this boy is yet he has to deal with....trevor. Stupid ass trevor im gonna terminate him.
Lastly- The writing in this chapter is so impressing? Like the way things are phrased and metaphors that are used- it conveys emotions so much and makes you feel them too. I love the connotative words used to make the reader feel certain things- the way things are described and the amazing way you write. The vocabulary is so vast- i love it. Im always learning new words while reading these❤
I CANT wait for the next chapter!! Once again you have impressed and baffled me with an exellent continuation!!
