#kiret

[akhmadfatoni1]

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[akhmadfatoni1]

Anak ke-3

Hari ini niatnya mau USG ke Puskesmas, kebetulan faskes sejak mau ANC dipindah ke Puskesmas. Yah, dulu anak kedua, Jatnika Lubna Maharatuha, waktu mau ANC ke Puskesmas diomelin karena Faskesnya tidak di sana. Belajar dari pengalaman, maka sebelum ANC, faskes dipindah dahulu. Disuntik obat, lemes dan kedinginan. Kamu harus kuat sayang. So, Faskesnya karena sudah di Puskesmas dan kebetulan ada…

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[kathea]

omg yeeeeeeeeeees I just came up with the best scene ever? :3

(In response to this meme)

This is a short story about Kiret, and I still get very excited when I read the outline, although I'm not sure other people will find it as brilliant as me, it might just be very specific authorservice. xD

I have only written one paragraph and now I can't finish it because the paragraph is too good and whatever I try to write can't keep up with it. 😅

The story is about poisoning. >8D

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[In his mind] He saw him, lying at his feet, writhing in pain, whimpers escaping past his lips with foam at the corners of his mouth… He is in his power. Kiret is the one responsible for his misery. And he didn’t need to do as much as drop a few herbs in his drink to destroy this man. These thoughts made him feel so powerful. It made his heart beat fast, blood rushing through his veins, his hands shaking with excitement.

[melancholyofnicko]

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[kathea]

I changed my style of drawing nose... Maybe it's not good, perhaps it looks awful, I don't really know, not many people have seen it... But I can't go back to my previous style because... I just stopped liking it.

So, the first one is my new character Kiret. He's got like... his own "story" not related to my other stories. His hair is red. The "ornaments" on his forehead were quite random. I am not really sure what it is. Was he born with it, is it a tattoo or a paint...? I quess it's just a paint that he can remove and change. However, other people of his tribe or nation have "ornaments" on their faces too but I think they can't remove it... I'm not sure what it is in their case. (I had an idea that it could be some kind of a symbiotic mould or something, lol. x"D I actually like this idea, although it doesn't make much sense.)

A typical item for Kiret is a torch (a flambeau, not the thing with bateries) because - unlike other people of his nation - he cannon see in the dark. We would think that he has good eyes but people from his tribe think that he has really bad eyes. It's hard for him since he lives in a cursed forest where there is always dark. So he carries a torch wherever he goes (unless he's in his house).

His hobby is making poisons. (But yeah he makes various potions but poisons are his favourite. But he has to carefully try his new potions (and poisons) on himself, which is one of the reasons why he is so skinny.)

He's about seventeen, I think.

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The second boy is his... well... they don't like each other a lot. (I don't want to call him his "enemy" because that sounds just... uhm... like if they were in a war or something. >_>') His hair is like orange but you can call it ginger if you want. There is not much colour in a dark forest anyway.

He's a good fighter, maybe the best of their little village, although he's so young (maybe 14?). (Bojuje s takovou obyčejnou dlouhou dřevěnou tyčí a já nevím, jak se tyč řekne anglicky. :"D) Maybe it's because of this that he feels so important. Yeah, he's quite proud... People like him because he defends their village. He often has an argument with Kiret, actually every time he happens to meet him. He doesn't like him carrying torches in the forrest, because something could catch fire... He cannon understand that Kiret has no choice since he cannot see in the dark. So they often argue and sometimes this boy beats up Kiret. (Kiret is older and higher but he's not really good at fight...)

Ugh, I would like like to write more but I am afraid nobody would want to read it. -.- Also I would have nothing to say later. :>

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This is just a random woman with horns. xD It could be a character from this story but I don't think people of their nation can have horns... People could not gain horns by any natural way.

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Jsem líná to psát znova česky... Vidíte, jak je to dlouhé? :"D Kdyby někdo něčemu nerozuměl, tak to přeložím.