Just a quick disclaimer before we get this show on the metaphorical road:
1. If you like RWBY, then great! You got enjoyment out of something that me and the other writer found heavily flawed. I cannot ever possibly take that away from you, and if you feel like we’re actively trying to, then I can assure you that wasn’t our goal. Our goal is just to give our own rendition on a show that we both think could use a second opinion on the writing.
2. Of course, no hate to the writers. I’m sure they’re trying their best, and I cannot possibly encourage any hate towards them. We just think that their script could probably use a rewrite.
3. Anything you place on the internet; Comments, Writing, Shows, is up for Critique. Of course, this can refer to RWBY, but we both are not exempt from this rule. If you have any critiques, we would love to hear them, as it would help us improve and learn what not to do next.
4. This is not supposed to be a serious ‘Here’s what it SHOULD be,’ this is just a simple ‘Here’s our version of something that already exists’- an AU, if you will.
5. Please, for the love of god, No NSFW Asks and Messages; There are Minors here, and doing so will get you instant banned.