well well well well well ! what i really like about your portrayal for rgb is that your writing really captures the hesitance and often looked over innocence in his character that readers may take at face value. sure, rgb knows a lot about his world, it's history and the laws in it but he doesn't really know a lot about 'himself', and the underlying paranoia of what happens when the switch is flipped. he wants to be good, but he's also uncertain and i like that you write that so well <33
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