Naive. Super by Erlend Loe
I wanted to love this novel. I really did. It’s been called “charming,” and “deceptively simple,” by people who are way smarter than I am. A brief overview: an unnamed, 25 y/o, male narrator takes us through what could be called a nervous breakdown in excruciating detail. He does a whole lot of doing nothing and playing with children’s toys and riding a bicycle around his town. There’s not much of a plot and the characters seem to fit archetypes of roles rather than playing the roles in actuality.
It’s worth mentioning that I read this book for a class on “Neurodivergent Literature,” and that it’s been translated from Norwegian into English. It was also published in 1996. (None of those facts bear any relation to each other, but please enjoy my hodgepodge of a sentence or two.) I was a bit confused about this narrator being used as an example (by my professor) of a neurodivergent and/or mentally ill narrator becauses I found most of his choices and thought processes to be very easy to understand and follow. Then I remembered I have mental illnesses out the wazoo and I’m not exactly the poster child of normalcy.
That being said, what really got to me about this novel was the syntax. This could’ve been an amazingly eloquent novel, and it does express some very complex ideas, but they’re executed horribly. Most of the sentences are basic, simple sentences, and a lot of them are fragments. The narrator is obviously highly intelligent and I see that Loe was trying to create a certain voice (or vibe, as the youth would say) but all he really accomplished was creating the voice of an adult man who talks like a second grader. Not cute!
I did enjoy the ending because it sort of broke the narrator’s ridgid (yet hopeful) worldview and this navel-gazer realized not everything is about him.













