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I believe that the government should be held responsible for the unhealthy, average American diet. Because of this reason they should also be accountable for changing our envionment and what is most readily available to us. Another major influence in the food choices we make are due to advertisers. With companies encouraging us to choose the cheaper, yet larger choices, it becomes harder to say no for some. Giant retailers still have many steps to take in order to reduce our sodium, and added sugar in packaged foods. We need more farmers markets, more organic aisles, and healthier drive-through resteraunts. Until we continue these steps further we will consistantly have generations eating the wrong things, and facing the consequences.