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Chapter 2, Page 90 (2.90.102)

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The scene cuts from Elian’s childhood back to the present, with him and Fawya, as Fawya speaks up again. Night has fallen and it’s much darker.

“Hey, I have a question!” Fawya pipes up.

“Uh, yeah?” Elian asks.

“Why isn’t this Nania person the main character? She sounds a lot cooler than you!” she asks. “You found something as rare as a phoenix and give it away!? You lose ON PURPOSE because you feel bad for the other guy!?”

“Wow… Y’know how to make a god feel special, Princess…” Elian says, leaning backwards.

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Chapter 2, Page 99 (2.99.111)

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He stares up at the night sky, looking very tired again, and thinks “Sometimes things that are good… are very, very sad.”

His own eyes now begin to droop closed.

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Chapter 2, Page 95 (2.95.107)

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Elian starts to sing. Growing tired, Fawya leans against him.

“H-hey-- that’s… cheating…” she mutters. “...You channel… through singing…? Me too…”

Finally, she falls asleep completely.

For just a moment, Elian lets her lean there, smiling down on her.

Like the little sister he lost so long ago.

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Chapter 2, Page 94 (2.94.106)

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Now Elian hesitates before speaking. But just as he’s about to answer, something startles him.

He doesn’t let Fawya notice. He puts an arm around her shoulder.

“Looks like it’s gettin’ late, ain’t it past your bedtime?”

“I’m 13, I sleep when I want,” Fawya says.

Elian grins. “Not when you invite the god of sleep into your house.”

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Chapter 2, Page 87 (2.87.99)

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Nania said, “Maybe you don’t believe in yourself, Elian-- and maybe the whole city doesn’t, and maybe the Lady in the Soil doesn’t even--”

“Wow… Great pep talk Nania…” Elian cut in, sarcastically.

She placed her hands on Elian’s shoulders. Elian paused, looking at her, and she brightly smiled back.

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Chapter 2, Page 82 (2.82.94)

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An establishing shot of some birds sitting on a roof.

And then Nania yells WHAT!!! Loud enough to make them take flight.

While chewing on a piece of bread, Nania also chews Elian out.

“You let some scrawny archer boy steal your bird!? Elian, this is a disaster.”

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Chapter 2, Page 81 (2.81.93)

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Elian and Nania have been knocked to the ground by the force of Nania’s hug, Elian still very appearing very dazed. A bit sheepishly, Nania grins.

“Eheh… Sorry, Elian…” she says.

“Heyyy, Nania, good t’see you too…” Elian says once he can focus.

“Worked hard on your hunt, huh!? Well, you returned last so you must have something extra good!” Nania exclaims, grinning with excitement.

“Uh…” Elian looks down awkwardly. “Well I FOUND a phoenix…”

“A phoenix!?” Nania exclaims, “Those are so rare!”

“Well… I FOUND it, but…” Elian trails off.

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Chapter 2, Page 93 (2.93.105)

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She goes to answer him, then hesitates. For a moment, she considers the words she’s about to say, and finally speaks.

“Legends and myths… are meant to entertain and inspire… but you make them sound like… a really sad thing…”

The smile has slipped entirely now from Elian’s face.

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