impextoo replied to your post: Ooh, could we please have a Pitch's Perspective of chapter 16 of 'From the Darkness We Rise'? It would be all sorts of awesomecakes to have Pitch's first hand account of fucking all that frost out of Jack :D
If we’re voting, I’d love for it to be the 2nd of the sexual encounters in Ch. 16. It was a major sensory overload for Jack and I cannot imagine what it was like for Pitch!
You'd better believe that if I do chapter 16, it'll be like ALL of that ridiculous Operation Seduce Jack and the aftermath, and it'll end up being 30,000 words long honestly you can just sprinkle flowers over me now because I need to go lie down in preparation.
15,000 words of it will be Pitch thinking, incessantly, 'Is he awake yet? How long should I let him sleep? What about now? Is he awake now? ...Damn it I'm turned on.'
But actually I'm working on chapter 21 of ISWF right now (1500 words and counting), as well as a chapter of Game Theory (1500 words an also counting). So I will get to it maybe after that!