I need someone to rate my language skills and tell me if I suck or not.
I wrote the "prelude" (Author note? Prologue? Hell if I know how it's called, a bunch or cryptic text which goes before the main story) to Artistic Immortality. Can someone read it and tell me if it's readable? If not, what should I fix?
To sum up: People please give me constructive criticism on my writing.
The text is under the cut.
People have always had a knack for automatization.
Fully automating something means you've reached the ceiling in this specific area. There. Nowhere higher to go. You can produce an item without ever lifting a finger. A machine will do it and then distribute the item to anyone who wants it. Of course, you can improve the automatization by tweaking it, making it faster, making it more precise, making the item it produces better, but you will eventually stand down and say that that's it. This is your Magnum Opus. Sometimes it's good. This is the reason the shelves of grocery shops are fully stocked. But sometimes people try to automate something that doesn't... "support" it. Can you imagine? An item that is so complex, so intricate, that giving a machine a command to recreate it will simply break it! Make it useless. More to that, even less than useless. Worthless.
It may be fine for general public. After all, who cares about who or what created their item? It works - it's good. Nobody would look into it too much. But if you know how the item works, how it's created, how it's supposed to look like - you will immediately call a bluff. You will find hundreds of ways you could do it better. Eventually, you'll conclude that it's only advantage is it's price and time spent.
And then you will find out that these are the only advantages people need, and lose faith in most of the humanity.
This is the story about the time when humans tried to automate art.
Poisonous Eyes Inktober Day One, baby! Sorry this is kind lackluster. It's late and I need to go to sleep, but I really wanted to at least do a small drawing. I wanted to do the official prompts, but I'm also kind of new at inking and needed to brush up on anatomy, so I decided, why no do both? Small anatomy drawing based on the official prompts! Brilliant! Let's see of I can keep this up for a month haha *internal crying* Constructive criticism is welcome!
