« [The Atlantic] ran [Rachel] Carson’s essay with the title “Undersea” in the September 1937 issue. Weeks [the editor] had identified what many of Carson’s readers would come to understand: She didn’t merely present facts and information, but invited readers to join her in a way of seeing beyond the limits of our own perceptions. The wonder animating her writing and the beauty of her prose is what made it so effective—and what subjected her to intense criticism as a woman writing about science.
A meticulous editor of her own work, Carson scrapped an elaborate opening to “Undersea” in favor of a simple one: “Who has known the ocean?” The answer—that “neither you nor I, with our earthbound senses” can possibly experience that alien medium—becomes a summons “to sense this world of waters known to the creatures of the sea.” Carson advises readers to “shed our human perceptions of length and breadth and time and place, and enter vicariously into a universe of all-pervading water.”
The essay that follows is an exercise in doing just that. Carson’s writing moves like a musical composition, carrying the reader through different realms of sea life—the tide pool, the middle depths of the ocean, the ungraspable reaches of its floor. In her telling, each element taken together makes for a grand cosmic symphony. “Every living thing of the ocean, plant and animal alike, returns to the water at the end of its own life span the materials that had been temporarily assembled to form its body,” she explains. “Individual elements are lost to view, only to reappear again and again in different incarnations in a kind of material immortality” that lives in everything: the tiniest plankton, the yellow-crowned purple sea slug, the great bulk of the blue whale.
The sensibilities that Carson embodied—an engagement with the natural world rooted in both wonder and scientific rigor—continued a tradition of women naturalists extending back to the 19th century. On her family’s farm outside of Pittsburgh, Carson’s mother, Maria, encouraged her to explore and study on her own. Maria, and Carson herself, were shaped by writers such as Olive Thorne Miller and Anna Botsford Comstock, who brought to life birds, insects, plants, and forests. [...]
With Silent Spring, the blend of curiosity and scientific rigor that made “Undersea” so compelling evoked something more than wonder; it became a call to environmental action. [...] As Silent Spring’s influence grew, she became subject to intense backlash, much of which questioned her credibility as a woman writing about science outside of academia. For critics, the lyrical quality of Carson’s writing was grounds for suspicion rather than praise. “Many scientists sympathize with Miss Carson’s love of wildlife, and even with her mystical attachment to the balance of nature,” one wrote in Time. “But they fear that her emotional and inaccurate outburst in Silent Spring may do harm by alarming the non-technical public.”
The trouble for Carson’s critics was that even if her attachments to nature seemed a little mystical, her conclusions were correct. What they decried as a flight of fancy or emotion was instead a serious proposition. Using the findings of science to awaken people’s imaginations wasn’t a problem; it was the point. As Carson told a group of women journalists in 1954, “The more clearly we can focus our attention on the wonders and realities of the universe about us, the less taste we shall have for destruction.” »
— Jake Lundberg, "Rachel Carson Has Known the Ocean" in The Atlantic