Reviewing Past Writing Works: Is Rock ‘n’ Roll Dead? Apparently, No One Knows
Grade 85%
This paper definitely a rhetorical analysis and it does its job of talking about rhetorical moves. Throughout the paper you do a good job of finding relevant quotes from the articles to your topic. There is also nice diction used within the paper, creative words and saying are nice in this kind of paper. The introduction and the conclusion both do their job well. By hooking the reader and explaining which paper is better from the beginning so I’m not waiting until the end to know the verdict is, also by wrapping up your thoughts and restating your main point.
One improvement to be made in the rhetorical analysis aspect is to the unpack your points more than you did in the paper. Just generally more in depth unpacking and explaining of the authors style and their rhetorical moves. Also, another improvement to be made is to re-work the thesis. Include a small amount of the rhetorical moves you plan to talk about so it’s clearer to where your planning on going with the paper. Overall this is a good rhetorical analysis, but it could be improved by being clearer in your writing and unpacking the finer details more.