#shutupsib

[sureisbuddy]

anyone like charts?

i will once again preface that i am a big fan of the pilot! and i also love data (and making charts) so this is all in good fun :33!

since people keep bringing up how swear heavy the pilot is, i was genuinely curious enough to go back and compare both the Pilot and the Webcomic on a couple categories:

-number of swears*

-variety of swears

-who says the swear

(ik im saying swear a lot but using "profanity" is taking this too seriously lol)

*note: i didnt count damn as a swear (soz?)

anyway! someones probably already done this before but i just thought itd be fun to do myself!

!feel free to let me know if i missed anything or if somethings wrong!

vvv numbers and specifics under the cut! vvv

Webcomic (Page 1 ==> John: Press [ENTER])

smartass

shit

fucking- Dave

piss- Dave

piss- Dave

piss- Dave

shitty

fucking

pricks- Rose (debatable)

piss-poor (debatable)

bastard

shit- Dave

fucking- Dave

fuck

~

fuck

fuck

fuck

fucking

shit

shit

candy-ass

assholes

shit

Total: 23

ass: 3 = 13.04%

fuck: 8 = 34.78%

piss: 4 = 17.39%

shit: 6 = 26.095

prick: 1 = 4.35%

bastard: 1 = 4.35%

Commands/StoryText/(Narrator?/Exposition?/John's thoughts sometimes so maybe it counts towards him?*): 6 = 26.09%

Dave: 6 = 26.09%

Rose: 1 = 4.35%

~

Image Text: 9 = 39.13%

*note: the dialogue in the pilot (which was nearly all of it) being best comparable to the textlogs in the webcomic was the determining factor as to who got credited for swearing. i might revise this

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Pilot

fucking- John

shit- John

dogshit- Dave

fucking- John

shit- John

fucking- Dave

fucking- Dave

ass- Dave

fucking- John

shit- Dave

shit- John

fucking- John

shit- John

fuck- John

fucking- John

fucking- John

shit- John

ass- John

fuck- John

fucks- Dave

fucking- Dave

shit- Dave

horseshit- John

fucks- Dave

bitch- Dave

shit- John

fuck- John

fuck- Karkat

fuck- Karkat

Total: 29

fuck: 16 = 55.17%

shit: 10 = 34.48

ass: 2 = 6.9%

bitch: 1 = 3.45%

John: 17 = 58.62%

Dave: 10 = 34.48%

Karkat: 2 = 6.9%

[sureisbuddy]

so no one cares bUT- (and i will preface this by saying i am for the homestuck pilot and i think the artstyles cute so theres nothing wrong on that front)

i saw the homestuck merch drop (and everything theres so silly <3) and took note of this design (which was used for a poster, deskmat, and on the site itself) it looked a bit off to me (not sure if anyone else agrees)

the main thing i noticed was that Rose's arm was hugee (like compared to the one across her chest), so i was just gonna edit that part but then i got carried away with my adjustments (lol). (didnt change jade at all btw cause i thought she looked fine)

not quite sure why they stretched their proportions out so much cause the designs on the shirts look really good (and quite cute :3)!

anyway im not really complaining or anything (i mean im probably just nitpicky) just wanted a to have a go at the edits really!

post pilot EDIT: their lankyness has grown on me (yes its only been a day) but i stand firm on the arm thing

[sureisbuddy]

the only artfights ive done so far are facing the same direction and i only just noticed smhh