I like to write about the food my OCs are eating - describing the various things they ate that are upsetting their stomach, or that they ate too much of, or that are giving them food poisoning, etc. So I'm wondering if people think it adds to a fic or is a distraction? I could be more general: "We had bar-b-cue for dinner and it isn't sitting well," he groaned. "I'm feeling kind of nauseous." As opposed to: The table was spread with at least eight different dishes - ribs, pulled pork, chicken legs coated in sticky sauce, mac n' cheese, baked beans, burnt ends of brisket, banana pudding with whipped cream and chocolate brownies. Rory ate some of everything and now he was suffering. "I ate too much fucking bar-b-cue," he groaned. "I'm really not feeling well."