hey just checking: im not falling into any problematic stereotypes with this character, am i?
-he is a magic user, but there are lots of other (non pwa) magic users in the story. he is powerful, but not exceptionally so (note: i originally called magic users "witches", but after scrolling this blog i have decided to remove this and use more ambiguous terms- i hope this is okay)
-he is a protagonist and a good guy. he gets frustrated easily and is very stubborn but works on these issues throughout the story and is always shown to be kind and caring despite his flaws
-he has purpley-blue eyes, not red
-luckily for him the world has been trapped in eternal night for plot reasons. well, lucky in the sense that he does not have to be as careful about burning (? i think- please talk about pwa and night) the crops of his small community that is reliant on farming dying because theyre unable to photosynthesise is not lucky
-the other characters dont treat him badly for having albinism but sometimes are surprised by how pale he is if they have not met him before
-his eyesight is not really a focal point, but i try to include things like him not being able to see far away things and struggling in bright lights (i.e with a fire near to him)
-described poetically at one point as pale like the moon by a character before they know his name? idk this one feels borderline unacceptable so i thought id ask- its not a negative comparison, but is it too close to the pwa are witches stereotype? if so i can easily change it
anyway i hope youre having a great day/night and thank you :)
I think this sounds perfect! I’m glad my blog could help you out with this! i appreciate you taking the term witch out too :) all of that seems fairly accurate!
as for PWA at night, there’s not really much to say lol-we do get burnt in the shin very easily though. and the sunlight can be dangerous for us and our eyes, as it can furtherly mess up our eyesight and we can get freckles on our eyes.
And for how pale we are, i’ve kinda done skin comparison’s with some of my friends usually as a joke, and my skin )(as someone with OCA) was about as pale as a redhead’s skin? we don’t have freckles, but if you look at references of someone with red hair that’s about the skin tone we have, if not paler.
I hope this helps! feel free to come back with any other questions!