once on youtube i saw a girl who had a comic and she redrew her least favorite comic page and used it as like a guide of what and what not do when making comics.
im not asking you to do that but if you did which handplates page would you redo and why?
A few leaped immediately to mind, haha.
Hate how I drew Papyrus's head on this page, hate it!! If I was going to go back and redo any page I'd go back to this one and redraw Papyrus.
Sans is otherwise fine on this page but I don't like his head in this panel, I'd redo that.
I don't like the back of Papyrus's jaw here, I remember struggling with it at the time. I could do a better job of it now I think.
I'd want to make the gutter bigger here to differentiate these two panels more.
Don't really like Sans's head here either, I'd redo that.
The right panel here is too cramped, you can't see the focal point very well (the SOUL in his chest). Would probably restructure the panels to try and give it more breathing room, probably cut the Papyrus one.
I'd make the blue glow around Papyrus's hand more obvious so it'd be more clear what he was trying to do.
The text in this panel is confusing because Sans's speech bubble is near Papyrus, would probably re-stage this to make it more clear who's talking (aside from fonts).
Don't like Asgore's expression in either of these panels, I'd want to redo these.
This one was just me being dumb and forgetting Sans was blind in his right eye, I did a quick fix at the time but nowadays I'd like to go back and shift his head around properly to make it clear he's looking with his left one.
The first two comics look weird to me but those were early, that makes sense. For a lot of pages it'd just be small changes, nothing super major but just smoothing out things. Inconsistencies with Gaster's hands, weird looking Blasters, Asgore's horns, bed too big, couch looks bad, that kind of thing. But the ones above are the ones that just jump immediately to mind as a "man that looks wonky ugh" moment, haha.
On the flipside I've always liked the brothers in these panels. There are always parts in the comic that are going to look wonky to me, but there are parts I still really like too! Important to remember both things.
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