It was cold I was uncomfortable I hated the cold Always had But you were there And this was for you So I accepted it I’d do anything for you And that’s a good thing Everyone needs someone Who will sacrifice everything for them I was that someone for you But you knew And that’s where the problems began When no left my vocabulary And you knew that it had So no longer were questions asked Demands were made And I readily complied Not happily I’m not sure how I felt about it I hadn’t paid it any thought before But thinking other thoughts Distracted me from feeling the cold So I was thinking about it now And I realized I didn’t like it Not the slightest I didn’t like I was standing in the snow Without a sweater or coat Listening to you shout From the top of a bridge What you hated about world Though the idea intrigued me And I had an inkling to join you Your name would have been the first thing To escape my bluer by the minute lips Because a fire was growing within me A fire of hatred towards you I hated fires too And maybe the combination Of fire and cold Made me walk away from you Yes, you befriended me When I was but but a mouse And showed me new things But I’m still a mouse So you haven’t helped me to change I’m a third wheel To your silly games Funny because it’s only you and me Or I thought it was Before I realized you just wanted An eye witness To recount your oddities To anyone who would listen So you could pry their mouths agape It was always you and your games And I was one too The one you lost The first Hopefully the first in a succession of many
(Strong criticism)