Jun 5, 2022
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A better copy for HP printers Telugu Ad
The subtext "HP Ink Tank ప్రింటర్ల విస్తృతమైన శ్రేణి నుండి ఎంచుకోవడం ద్వారా విశ్వసనీయమైన బిజినెస్ పార్టనర్ను ఈ దీపావళి మీకు ఇస్తుంది" - even though conveys the meaning, the sentence formation makes it a bit tough to read.
All one needs to do just get the subject objects in right place to >>>
Better Copy
ఈ దీపావళి కి, HP Ink Tank ప్రింటర్ల విస్తృతమైన శ్రేణి నుండి ఎంచుకోండి, ఒక విశ్వసనీయమైన బిజినెస్ పార్టనర్ను పొందండి "
SpiceJet new flights from Hyderabad - A better copy suggestion
When you introduce flights to new sectors, you start operating the flights between those destinations. The problem with this copy is the translation doesn’t say they are starting new flights to these destinations.
The issue is with the translated word “పరిచయం". instead they should have used the other words that translates to introducing, which are “ప్రవేశపెట్టు” , “ప్రారంభించు”
So the better copy would be
ప్రవేశపెడుతున్నాం హైదరాబాద్ నుండి నాసిక్ కు, ఢిల్లీ మరియు జమ్మూకు డైలీ ఫ్లెట్స్.
A few corrections to Sleepwell Telugu Print Ad
Maruti Suzuki - Rainy Season offers - Telugu ad copy improvements.
HP Printers Telugu Ad Copy - Almost perfect, except for a few typos
Honda Activa
First things first, the first word is a typo
it is called “మనకి" not “మనకీ”
Coming to the whole copy , i have not seen the english one, to figure out what they actually want to convey. But as a native telugu speaker, the whole copy has a negative tone.
Did someone say, that India is not growing any more? Why is Honda India on a backfoot and want to show the world that India is growing/flying again?
Point taken that they concluded the copy saying that “You” as a consumer and “Activa” are like two wheels to the nation, to take it forward.
But what is the context behind saying that India is now able to stand on its own legs, what is the reference? Covid? Independence ? Over all a confusing copy if you ask me.
Dunzo Daily- Adarsh Bharateeya - some suggestions to make the copy better
Original Text - My suggestion- Why?