#underfeel

[gogonini16]

I think I love Tear a bit too much…

Tear belongs to @eriscary

Feel variant belongs to me

[gogonini16]

Lore stuff

Ola belongs to me

[gogonini16]

Holy shit.

It’s been over a year since I wrote the prequel for Underfeel. (And I still need my time on other chapters but schoooool T^T)

Either way, for a lil event, yall can put in ask about how you/your oc would interact in Underfeel. For all asks about this, I’ll tag them with #1yroffeel. No deadlines, and have fun!

[gogonini16]

Underfeel Ch 5: New Home #2

Me and Ola find it very simple to go through each puzzle, though the little skeleton was on to something. “We made it to Snowdin. The actual town, I mean,” my ghost friend says, while I look around in awe.

“The people here seem very friendly, a lot more better than some others I met here.”

“Matter of fact, your observations are correct,” a masculine, wise voice says. I turn around to see a man who looks a lot like Sans and his brother, except he’s very tall and wears a black version of a lab coat. I see Sans’ brother hiding behind his leg.

“My name is W. D. Gaster, but please just call me Dr. Gaster. It seems you’ve met my son Sans, haven’t you?”

“Yes, I have, Dr. Gaster. He’s quite the comedian. Is that his brother over there? I didn’t quite catch his name.”

“Hi, I’m Papyrus, but I go by Paps!,” says the little child. He seems very excited to meet me and Ola, or he’s just extremely hyper.

“Hello there, little one. My name’s Ola.”

“Hm, you seem pretty cool for a ghost girl.”

“Thank you, but I think you’re the coolest here, Papy.”

Papyrus’ eye lights lit up in adoration to Ola’s words.

“Thank you!” He quickly says. “Dad was planning to house you two until something big happens!”

“The kid’s right,” Dr. Gaster admits.

“None of us mind, so sure,” I answer.

“Yay, more time with the ghost girl!” Papy exclaims as he starts to lead us to his home. What a cool kid. Maybe he forgot that he was talking to a human, or it’s all part of his plan. Who knows?

[gogonini16]

Underfeel Ch 4: Welcome to Snowdin!

The weather seems pretty, but cold. It reminds me of winter, where kids would be playing, only for it to end early the next year. Here, due to no sunlight, it probably remains cold all the time. It is called Snowdin for a reason. A tiny voice interrupts my thoughts. “Don’t you know how to greet a new pal? Turn around and shake my hand.”

As soon as I turned and touched the figure’s hand, a whoopie cushion released all its air.

“Sorry ‘bout that,” the kid says. He has a baby blue beanie with a blue and purple jacket, black shirt, and black shorts with white stripes at the sides.

“The name’s Sans. What’s yours?,” he asks.

“Nifemi.”

“Nice to meet you. I’m supposed to be on duty right now, but I’m too lazy. You’re lucky you didn’t meet my brother.”

“How come?”

“He’s a human-capturing fanatic. Since he wants to show the underground that he’s brave, he wants to capture one.”

“Oh, ok.”

Sans points to another skeleton, whose a bit shorter than Sans.

“That’s him right there. You should go hide behind that lamp.”

I run over to the lamp and hide as Sans’ brother walks over to Sans. As those two talk, I feel someone tapping my shoulder, except that someone is a ghost. I slowly turn around to see a ghost-like girl black girl with long twists and blue eyes. “Hey,” she whispers.

“Hello,” I say in my mind. “Who are you and what do you want?”

“The name’s Ola. For your second question, I want to get out of the underground.”

“Huh, same goal.”

“Do you mind if I tag along on your journey?”

“Not at all.” Ola disappears into thin air, but she can still speak in my mind.

“I’m still here, don’t worry.”

A few moments later, the small skeleton leaves and Sans calls out to me.

“Hey, you can come out now.”

I step out of my hiding spot.

“Your brother is very…excited for capturing a human.”

“I know, but Papyrus is still the coolest bro. Also, keep watch of his puzzles. He recalibrated them not too long ago.”

“Gotcha. Let’s just hope they ain’t too hard.”

[gogonini16]

Underfeel Ch 3: Does it Really Hurt You That Much?!

“Child, where are you going?” Toriel asks concerningly. “I thought you knew better than to snoop around here.”

“Sorry, my curiosity got the better of me,” I explain.

“Please, stay here for your safety.”

“I can handle myself, thank you.”

“I don’t want you getting hurt.”

“I know, but I can defend myself. I’ll be fine.”

“This is your last warning, my child. Stay here.”

“No thanks,” I reply sternly.

“If that’s what you want,” Toriel says blankly. Why is she so persistent?!

She aims multiple flames at me, but I dodge them quickly.

“Child, you need to stay here for your safety.”

“I don’t think so,” I respond, standing my ground.

“I wish I didn’t have to fight you to fix this, but if that’s how it’s going to be, then so be it.”

“You didn’t need to fight in the first place!” I exclaim.

“My child, what do you mean?” Toriel asks.

“Violence isn’t the answer to every problem. If you realized that, you wouldn’t be fighting me right now,” I explain.

A few minutes of silence pass until Toriel finally breaks it.

“You’re right. We shouldn’t be fighting. I know how capable you are; you can take care of yourself even in the hardest times. So go ahead, just please stay safe.”

As Toriel moves out of the way, I walk over to the door, ready for whatever happens next.

“I will,” I say reassuringly as I step through the door and into the snowy forest.

[gogonini16]

Underfeel Ch 2: Another Day, Another Monster to Fight

I woke up to the delightful aroma of butterscotch pie wafting through the air, filling my room with its tempting scent. It was early in the morning, and I couldn't help but wonder who would be baking pie at this hour. Then it struck me - it was Toriel. She loved to bake pies, and it was no surprise that she would be up early in the morning to create one of her delectable treats. I had been craving pie for quite some time, so this was the perfect opportunity to indulge in Toriel's delicious creation.

Quickly getting ready, I made my way downstairs, where I found Toriel taking a freshly baked pie out of the oven, humming a cheerful tune as she worked. "Good morning, my child," she greeted me with a warm smile.

"Good morning, Toriel," I replied.

"How was your sleep, my child?" she inquired.

"It was good. And yours?" I asked in return.

"I slept well, thank you. I've made some pie," she said, beaming with pride.

"I could smell it baking from my room, and it smells delicious," I told her.

"Would you like to sit at the table and have some?" she offered kindly.

"I would love to, thank you," I replied eagerly.

Taking a seat at the dining table, I eagerly awaited a slice of the freshly baked pie. Toriel handed me a generous portion, and as I took my first bite, I was reminded of how incredible Toriel's pies truly were. The taste brought back memories of when I first arrived here. Finishing the slice, I found myself pondering about the locked room and the mysteries it held. What secrets could it possibly contain? Perhaps it held treasures or even a passage to Snowdin. I had heard many stories about the quaint village, and I was curious to find out if they were all true. Venturing back upstairs, I decided to explore my room and stumbled upon a drawer filled with intriguing items - a key, a shotgun, ballet shoes, a notebook, a frying pan, a knife, and a glove. These items must have belonged to the humans who came before me, and I couldn't help but wonder about their significance and purpose.

Picking up the key from the drawer, I hurried back downstairs, determined to unlock the mysterious door. As I turned the key in the lock, the door creaked open, revealing a dark, foreboding hallway. Without hesitation, I stepped into the darkness, making my way down the hall until I came face to face with a towering door that I believed to be the exit of the ruins. Just as I was about to reach for the handle, Toriel appeared, blocking my path and leaving me in a state of shock and confusion.

[gogonini16]

Underfeel Chapter 1: Another Human?!

A spider crawls on my hand, looking very scared. “What happened now?”, I question. The spider just udders the word It jumps up like a frog, then it feigns hurt. I can tell what it’s trying to do.

Who is hurting the Froggits, and why?

Even though I don't like this job, I have to be owned by Muffet, the manipulation monster, thanks to Asgore, the king of the monsters, and the Monster of Pride. It’s not the best thing in the world, but I can deal with selling sweet pastries with no pay. Besides, I’m too young to get a job. Anyway, I get up from the floor of the bakery and I run to the Ruins. As soon as I got there, I saw… a human child about to kill a Froggit?! How the…“You’ve got to be kidding me…”, I mutter under my breath.

I run to the Froggit, blocking the human’s attack. “Wait a sec, who are you?”, the human asks.

“I’m Nifemi,” I answer, “the seventh human to fall into the underground.”

“I thought you were Fri-”, the human trails off.

“Please don’t call me that,” I interrupt. “Anyways, who are you, and what are you doing about to kill a Froggit?”

“It’s an instinct to kill these things. They’re just so…odd.”

“Aren’t you judgy?”

“I can’t help it, ok?!”

“Sure you can’t. Now get outta here before you ‘accidentally’ kill a monster.”

“How do I do that?”

“Honestly, no idea.”

“Ok…”

Suddenly, the human is randomly launched up back onto Mt. Ebott. “See ya!”, I yell. Well, that’s done. Time to go back to the bakery. I run back to Muffet’s bakery, and Muffet asks me “Where have you been?”

“A human was about to kill a Froggit, and you know how bad that would be.”

“I see. Well done, human.”

“No problem, Ms. Muffet.”

“I’ve also been noticing black goop around the place. Do you have any idea why?”

“My corrupted body can shoot out tendrils now. That’s probably why.”

“Oh, ok. Thanks for letting me know. Now get out of my sight.”

I leave the bakery to go to my shed, which is my room. Not fitting for a twelve-year-old, am I right? I rest on the hay mattress in the corner. I know, my life is a wreck, but I have to make the best out of it. At least I’m still alive. Soon enough, the night comes by and it's already dawn.

“Wake up,” Muffet says.

I get up and get ready. I wear a black sweater with a purple crescent in the middle.

“Good choice,” Muffet comments.

“Thanks,” I replied.

We then go to the bake stand to sell Muffet’s “perfect” pastries. They're not bad; it’s just that they’re not perfect—and they never will be. And I mean that no sugarcoating is needed.

As the day goes on, Muffet sells her pastries everywhere. She makes a lot of money. At least 200G.

When we get to Muffet’s home, she says, “You did good advertising today.”

“Thank you,” I replied.

I get back to my small shed and lay on the hay.

“Today was tiring,” I say aloud.

I stare at the ceiling in boredom and weariness. As the minutes pass by, I drift off to sleep peacefully. But at 1 am, I get an idea to end the monsters’ suffering. Since every monster likes to fight me, why don’t I show them not to? Maybe they’ll be able to reach the surface! That’ll also mean I’ll be able to see my family again!

When I wake up, I leave a note on Muffet’s table saying:

I have a plan in mind. I’ll be gone for a long time. Sell stuff without me. I’ll be fine, trust me.

With gratitude,

-Nifemi

Then I went to the ruins and came across Toriel. She was the first to take care of me in the underground. At this point, she’s my mom down here. “My child, what are you doing here? Do you need me to teach you something?” she asks.

“Yes, I do,” I answered.

“Then follow me.”

I follow her to the many puzzle rooms. She teaches me how to do them for at least 30 minutes. We also pass by the dummy and Napstablook, a sad, depressed ghost who needs a friend and Flowey, whom Toriel says to stay away from.

“Thank you”, I say after we’re done.

“You are welcome”, Toriel replies, “Let’s go to my place.”

I followed her home.

“Please make yourself comfortable here. You’ll need to,” she says.

“Ok.”

I got onto the couch and decided to read some books. For what seemed like hours, I was lost in my imagination, imagining that I was in the story. I never read this long before. These books are so good, that I could read them here forever! I didn’t want to stop, but my mind reminded me that there were things to do. I didn’t come to the ruins for no reason. I passed by a locked room, right next to the staircase. Huh, I wonder what that’s for. I closed the book and went upstairs to look for a spare bedroom. Luckily, I found one and I decided to change into some pajamas. I was so tired, I slept almost immediately after I got onto the bed. In my dreams, I fantasized about the monsters finally getting onto the surface. It may seem impossible, but I know I can do it!