The Incredibles movies have some great superhero designs (and their lore is getting a resurgence), so I wanted to try my hand at "modernizing" some designs from the Incredibles. I wanted to keep the Inspired by the Golden Age of Superhero looks but darker and "realistic" for the more modern take for superhero movies.
It was a really fun way to explore who these characters are and how they would act/perceive themselves. It also allows me to breakdown the choices made for the designs of these characters and really understand who they are.
More infodumping below
I didn't want to change too much with the older designs. They're really good and I didn't want to rewrite who they were, hence, the notes in the middle.
Gazerbeam is an interesting character. You have to remember the dichotomy of who he is, both as a super and his secret identity.
He's a lawyer, meaning, he's serious and very meticulous when it comes to his work. You see this with the dark colors and his lack of flare. There's no cape or major pops of color to catch your attention. His symbols are on his belt buckle and on his forehead. They're small and don't stand out too much because he doesn't overtly stand out Gazerbeam doesn't really want to (remember, he hid himself for years). He's here to get the job done right and by the writing in the law.
Although, this is contrasted by the fact that his lawyer work is pro-bono, meaning that he often took cases in which the defendant(s) couldn't pay. We don't know if only started this after he became a super or if he always did this, but it signals his want to do good. He's a believer in supers; we see this in his last message about Kronos. He figured that another super would be able to find his message and to save the others. That's why he has pops of a lighter blue in his uniform, it's to signify the light in the darkness.
I made his suit more "aerodynamic" because I figured he would be an endurance super. I figured he would have similar stamina to those who run the 400, the 800 or the mile. This means that while he mostly spends his time running longer distances at a decently fast pace, he can kick into another gear for when he needs to sprint. He gets a tighter suit with most of it covered in little divots to help with the wind (similar to A-Train's costume design). I should've probably made him have thicker soles to help with his running since he's running around on the ground. It would give him a better boost while also absorbing the shock helping his bones.
This is also why he's on the skinner side. Long distance runners are skinny but still have muscle. You can see that he has powerful leg muscles (his thighs) that help with pushing off, but overall, he's fairly lanky. I think it's a combo of high metabolism while also needing to be lighter or carry less weight with his suit in order to better run/keep up with villains.
Despite how controversial his character is, I think I did the best with his costume. I wanted to keep most things the same with him as the ego, looks and personality are what make so many people love him.
I really wanted to keep the yellow trunks to showcase a sillier side to his personality, but it doesn't make sense as somebody like Superman would keep it (humanizing him), but Gamma Jack wouldn't since it would make him look silly. Gamma Jack is really intelligent, he would know how the public would view him. His wannabe nickname is Handsome Jack!! With trunks, they would take him less seriously but without, he comes off more suave and handsome rather than silly.
SO, I kept the cape but added texture to make it stand out from the rest of the yellow on his suit. I also attached it like most modern-day capes, at the spot where the shoulders meet the chest. I also alluded to his showboating personality by adding hints of green throughout the blue of his suit. I think it would be fun that whenever the sun hits his suit just right, you see shimmers of a beautiful green, similar to that of a male peacock. It's also why he hates getting his suit dirty because you can no longer see it's shimmer.
Adding to his ego, I think that Gamma Jack would be like one of those gym rats. The ones who are incredibly thin but still have major muscles. This combination adds to his attractiveness but also distracts from the fact that he doesn't have much else outside of his powers. He's a very weak character as he doesn't have standout strength or endurance and he has sub-par agility and even less indestructability. He's a glass cannon type of super. He's more likely to kill because if he doesn't than he's more likely to be killed himself.
We see that in the LEGO game, he doesn't wear gloves as his hands are fleshed colored. I like to think that it's because gloves hinder his abilities. I extended the arm part to his knuckles as to provide some sort of diversity and to also show his looks over practicality mentality. I haven't decided if the fabric would actually cover the palms or not yet. There's very little distinction with his boots (LEGO or drawn) so I just drew a version similar to the other heroes. Because of this, I changed his shoes resemble that of a football player's spats. It wraps around the ankles and boots to keep them in place while also making sure the laces aren't able to come undone. It helps ensure that the player is less likely to roll their ankle.
I also changed his symbol to resemble more of the radiation danger symbol (hence the triangle on his chest) but added a swoop at the bottom for a J. This makes it look like the gamma radiation symbol for Y + a J for his name.
I changed Voyd the most as Women's costumes have gone a huge change in modern times.
I mostly based her shape off of Yelena (Thunderbolts*) because Voyd's powers are teleportation. We don't have NSA documents like with the previous supers, so we don't know if she has great strength or endurance. So, I figured she'd need a bit more of a bulky suit to help her pack a punch. She can also be a bit bulkier since she can rely on her Vortexes to aid her mobility.
I kept her symbol relatively the same, just added some more flare. I made the middle hollow because you step through the portals rather than just
I changed her hair style/coloring because I feel like the og is just a hinderance. It's great to showcase that she's similar to violet and very nervous around ElasticGirl. However, that hair would become annoying very quickly. It blocks vision and probably gets stuck to her face. So I tried to keep a hairstyle that kept the length but stayed out of her face. I also wanted to keep the colored hair but figured it would be hard to hide outside of hero work. So I gave her a peak-a-boo hair style. There's two aspects to this, 1. The platinum blonde was a way more common color for dyed hair. 2. In her secret identity form, it shows the fact that she has to hide her superpowers. But when she's in her hero outfit, she showcases her true colors.
The more I redesigned her, the more I understood her character. She's a wanna-be, that's why her color choices aren't as smooth as the professionals. She feels like there's a lot going on but not in a cohesive way. She doesn't have creatives like Edna Mode to design her suit. It takes elements of the ogs (the skin tightness, the bright colors contrasted by darker ones, the leotard) and dials them up to feel like a child's OC rather than one of the greats.
And as I redesigned her, I took aspects of who she is rather than just her looks. That's why it's so different from her og character. It feels like a disservice bc she's a great character once you break it down. Her design works well while also feeling like it could've been better.
Helectrix have dyed hair and cooler hair since his OG looks chopped.
Makes his Super suit look cooler and made out of rubber like fabric.
So I might think he is a Gamma Jack fan when he was a child because he is interested in his hairstyle that he decided to make his hair look clean and hairspray when he keeps his hair meats a lot he would watch Gamma Jack on tv every time he came on but after the supers were banned Tom Current can’t watch Gamma Jack anymore because his parents forbid him to watch tv.
He is a thunderhead fan when he was a child and got adopted by Thunderhead because he is an orphan with no parents that he felt sorry for little Tom.
I think he got his powers when he accidentally touched tv to make it turned on with his fingertips at the age of 10 when he finds out he have electric powers.
So somebody headcanon Tom current being adopted by Thunderhead and I won’t deny it because that would be cool that they both have electricity powers that are similar but different.
I think Helectrix used have a brown hair as a kid but dyed his hair blonde like the Lego that he pretended to be Gamma Jack and play with his friends but he dyed his hair when he got older.
Voyd wears visor because there too many supers who wears domino masks so she could focus her vision on far range and change her supersuilt to look more appealing by adding platform heels,a bangles on also puts a jade earrings that is similar to her portals.
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Violet watched as Prism, she recognised her from her steams on the internet, showed Lucius and her Dad around the SDN branch. Her Dad was fidgeting with his hands, something he only did when he was worried, which was most days.
“Hey.” A woman’s voice got her attention, making Violet look up, “You alright, kid?”
The woman had short black hair, black jeans, a black crop-top under a purple jacket.
“I-I’m fine.” Lied Violet, not wanting the stranger to know how scared she was.
“Okay.” Said the woman, before vanishing.
Violet blinked, before a loud thud made her turn around, seeing the same woman stagger back, holding her forehead.
“Okay, that was a dick move!” Yelled the woman, before she vanished as a portal opened and an empty beer can was thrown at where her head was.
“Your brother’s going to be fine.” Violet turned and looked at Robert, at Mecha Man, “We’ve got people we trust watching him and, even if he does have the issue that Track Star has, it’s early enough for us to figure out a fix.”
Violet gave him a meek nod, she knew that all her classmates, including Tony, would kill to have Mecha Man, the powerless Superhero, talk to them. But, with what Dash could be at risk of, she found it difficult, and having the urge to throw up wasn’t helping either.
“Your parents,” Said Robert, sitting down across from her, “said you have a few… problems.”
“L-like what?” Asked Violet, looking at the man.
“Your teachers have told them that you stutter,” Said Robert, “and your Mom has said that your force fields are hit a miss at times, especially if you’re feeling pressured. In fact, the only power you don’t have a problem with is turning invisible.”
“I-I j-just want t-to be normal.” Violet tried to sound less like herself, since this was Mecha Man she was talking to, the only hero with enough bravery to go out without powers and do the right thing.
“Violet,” Said Robert, “you are normal, having powers, not having powers, neither of those things choses what normal is. I’m going to tell you, what I told one of my team, you don’t have a stutter or a problem controlling your powers. You have a confidence issue.”
“H-how a-am I s-supposed to be con-confident w-when I-I’m l-like t-this?” Asked Violet, getting a sigh from Robert.
“Violet, to be confident, you need to be comfortable with yourself,” Said Robert, “so, I want you to tell me one thing that you want to do, that you’re scared of messing up.”
Violet blinked, before her mouth moved on its own, “Prism’s autograph.”
Robert froze, before slowly nodded, “Okay…, I thought it was going to be something a bit more risky, but, hey, Prism loves having her ego stroked.”
“Hey!” Prism called over from the other side of the floor, “Fuck you, Roberto!”
“She’s joking.” Said Robert, getting to his feet, “Alright, let’s—”
One of the computers started wailing, cutting Robert off. Obviously recognising the tone, Robert paled and bolted to the computer.
“W-what’s going on?” Asked Violet, as Prism rounded the office space and guided her out.
“Don’t worry about it.” Said Prism, obviously knowing what it was, “Let’s go to the gym and other recreational shit.”
Robert, now with Mandy and Brainbook joining him.
“Who is it?” Asked Mandy, as Brainbook looked over Robert’s shoulder.
“Waterboy,” Answered Robert, as Brainbook frowned, “his vitals just spiked, then they stopped.”
“They stabilised?” Asked Mandy, glancing at Robert.
“No,” Corrected Brainbook, “they stopped. As in, the monitoring system isn’t detecting anything to monitor.”
“That doesn’t make any sense.” Said Mandy, frowning.
“It’s the same thing that happened with Pom-Pom, Bullet Train, Quake and Inferno.” Said Robert, turning his chair around, “I’m going to check on Phenomaman, see if he can find Waterboy.”
“I’ll handle that,” Said Brainbook, “you keep trying his comm, the monitoring software could simply be damaged.”
Robert frowned, before nodding and turning back to the computer.
I
“Sweet Talker, Pom-Pom, Bullet Train, Thunderbolt, Echo, Quake, Inferno, Boomerang, Waterboy, and, now,” Robert tried not to wince as Daniels listed off their MIA heroes, “Phenomaman. All missing in action, after being sent to an island in the middle of nowhere.”
“It’s near the Easter Islands,” Said Evelyn, resting her goggles on her head, “but, given that their vitals spiked and then, just as quickly, stopped, we may be looking at a trap situation.”
“We’ve also failed to contact Universal Man, Psycwave, Blazestone, Downburst, Vectress, Blitzerman, Apogee, Phylange, Everseer, Macroburst, Gazerbeam, and Hypershock,” Sighed Robert, “we managed to recruit Tradewind, but he went AWOL.”
“But, we have found Gamma Jack, Stormicide, Frozone and the Parr family.” Stated Mandy, “We also have leads on Plasmabolt and Fironic.”
“Two of your… ‘additions’ are children.” Said Daniels, raising an eyebrow.
“One of whom has the same problem Track Star did.” Added Evelyn, leaning back, “I fitted an inhibitor cuff to him, until we can figure out a fix.”
“So,” Said Daniels, frowning, “more bad news.” He glanced at Mandy, “Any more for the second round of the Phoenix Program?”
“Yes,” Mandy seemed to be more than eager to change the subject, “We’ve managed to collect Bulbox, we offered placement for his daughter at a school not too far from here.”
“He’s a super?” Asked Daniel, getting a nod from Mandy, “What about this… daughter?”
“She’s…, got powers,” Said Mandy, after a moment, “She’s roughly the same age of the oldest of the Parr kids, Violet.”
“Two flowers,” Mused Daniels, “is there going to be a third for this ‘bouquet’ you’ve started to build?”
“Oh, I didn’t mean,” Mandy tried to cover, “I just thought that they might make good friends.”
“Might be worth seeing about organising lessons, for them,” Suggested Robert, “teach them how to control their powers, just as a precaution.”
Daniels sighed, “Which means we will have to do a Psych-Eval on them. Speaking of,” he pulled a file from his desk, “I have some concerns about one of the dispatchers you’ve brought in.”
“If this is about Gamma Jack’s… opinion, we’ve already taken that into consideration.” Said Mandy, sitting up, “He didn’t allow it to colour his opinion on the training simulation and—”
“It’s actually about Robert Parr.” Interrupted Daniels, “It took a while, but Cummings managed to get him relaxed enough to talk. Parr has some deep-seated fears about keeping his family safe, believing that if he isn’t strong enough to protect the public, he would not be strong enough to protect his family.”
“Shit,” Swore Robert, leaning forwards, “I can talk to him, see if I can help.”
“While that is noble, Robert,” Sighed Daniels, “you are not an officially licensed psychologist or counsellor, which reminds me, CSPP need an address to send your diploma to.”
“You went to university?” Asked Mandy, looking at Robert.
“Started, I only finished recently.” Answered Robert, before looking at Daniels, “Bob might be more open to me than anyone else, he was able to figure out my identity within thirty minutes of meeting me outside of the mask.”
Daniels frowned, but said nothing.
“There also the issue of how we’re going to address nine of our heroes suddenly going missing.” Added Evelyn, “I mean, if I was trying to erase heroes from the world, I’d ruin their reputations to the point of all of them giving up.”
“We don’t need you to run another Screen Slaver program, Evelyn.” Said Daniels, glancing at her, “But, you do bring up a good point.”
“Let me bring up Waterboy and Phenomaman with the Z-Team,” Said Robert, getting up, “they’re both part of the Z-Team and, if anyone else were to tell them…”
Daniels sighed, before nodding, silently dismissing Robert and Mandy.
“Well, if they’re going,” Said Evelyn, getting up, “I’m going to pick apart that piece of tech that Robert brought back from that Kronos gang bust.”
Daniels nodded, before looking at a file, “Evelyn, while you’re at it, see if you can find Buddy Pine.”
I
Helen blinked at the heroes in front of her, she’d been given six heroes as her ‘dispatchees’, as Robert called them, the first one was Voyd, a young woman who could create portals, she reminded Helen of Violet, with the confidence issues she had, the second was He-lectrix, a musician that could control and absorb electricity. Krushauer, the third hero assigned to her, had telekinetic powers that allowed him to ‘crush’ objects, he also had superstrength and superhuman durability. The fourth hero, Brick, was similar, as she also had superhuman strength and durability, she could also jump large distances and her file said ‘metamorphosis’, whatever that meant, Brick’s main problem was that, while she was a strong as a sack of bricks, she was as smart as a sack of bricks. Screech, Helen’s fifth dispatchable hero, could fly, see in the dark and release a supersonic screech, although he also seemed to be nocturnal, which was something to work on. Reflux, the last hero Helen had been assigned, had a molten stomach and regurgitation, which more or less translated to that he could throw up lava and not get hurt.
“S-sorry if I-I was too, y’know, over eager,” Voyd tried to laugh, “b-but you’re… you, a-and I-I’m me, s-so…”
“That’s… alright, Voyd.” Nodded Helen, “It’s alright, you don’t need to apologise.”
“Yeah,” Snickered He-Lectrix, “leave that for Reflux.”
“It’s a genuine medical condition.” Said Reflux, just as Mecha Man ducked his into the room.
“Hey,” Mecha Man’s voice of everyone’s attention, “it’s past clocking out time, so you can all go home for today.”
“Why’re you suited up?” Asked Helen, getting up.
“Press conference,” Answered Mecha Man, looking around, “the uppers think I’m a safe bet, since I don’t have powers, so the crowd might listen to me more than the others.”
Helen blinked, “Okay, good luck, I guess?”
Mecha Man nodded, before leaving the room. Looking at the clock, Helen sighed, “He’s got a point, let’s head home and resume tomorrow.”
I
Courtney carefully spooned some mashed-up apple and banana into Robin’s mouth, the baby, caught mid-giggle, gummed on the food, just as she heard the front door open and close.
“How’d the press conference?” Asked Courtney, looking towards the door.
“The less said, the better.” Grumbled Robert, hanging his coat up, “Mandy’s making sure Sansweet’s still alive.”
“The asshole behind the lawsuit that made heroes illegal?” Asked Courtney, twisting to look at Robert, “Why was he there?”
“No idea.” Sighed Robert, before focusing on Robin, “Now, why do you let Mommy feed you, but not Daddy? Huh?”
Robin squealed and knocked her bowl to the floor, laughing as she reached for Robert.
“Sansweet’s not going to sue.” Mandy’s voice from the door made them look up, “Brainbook and Daniels somehow managed to convince him not to.”
“Daniels probably offered to throw him off the roof.” Said Robert, picking Robin up, with the baby grabbing his nose.
Mandy looked around, “Where’s Bertie?”
“BOO!” A small boy appeared behind her, making her jump, “I gots you, Momma.”
“Yeah,” Laughed Mandy, picking him up, “you did.”
“He’s managed to get turning invisible down,” Said Courtney, getting up, “especially when it’s bathtime.”
Bertie, freezing in Mandy’s arms, looked at his mother, and vanished, turning Mandy invisible in the process.
“You do realise I’m going to help bathe you, right?” Came Mandy’s disembodied voice, before the bathroom door opened and the two of them reappeared, with Courtney joining them. Robert, not for the first time, wondered if Bertie and Robin liked having two Moms.
I
“An SDN press conference went awry last night, after Oliver Sansweet, a former president of the Municiberg Bank, who sued Mr Incredible for quote-unquote ‘saving’ his life fifteen years ago, tried to go head-to-head with Mecha Man, who’s last press conference ended with him throwing a journalist out a window.”
Helen reached over and turned the TV up.
“As the footage shows, Mr Sansweet brought up Mr Incredible’s actions against him, as well as bringing his lawyer with him.” Said the news caster, as Sansweet and his lawyer stood and postulated, “Mecha Man had this to say;”
“For someone who was suicidal,” Mecha Man’s voice was his signature mix of cold and dry sarcasm, “you really found the will to sue a guy, when you could have done us all a favour and gone back up to the roof and thrown yourself off.”
“Mr Sansweet then threatened to sue Mecha Man for harassment and slander, which produced this response;” Helen watched as Mecha Man sauntered off the podium and up to Sansweet, and punched him square in the face, before dragging him to a stairwell and returning without him a second later, “SDN has already closed it’s ranks, with the rehabilitated villainess Prism ‘offering’ to ‘flash’ Mr Sansweet, which is what she calls blinding someone. SDN has also refused to cover Banks, Insurance Firms, and Chain locations, with Mr Gilbert Huph protesting the decision, claiming SDN had ‘poached’ Insuricare’s employees and customers.”
Helen didn’t find that surprising, since Bob had mentioned the Insuricare often refused to pay out on their policies, which was why Bob had been temporarily seconded by the SDN upper management to help set up the SDN insurance office. Allison and Jack had gone with him, since Allison was good with computers and Jack was, somehow, very proficient with legal paperwork. He’d suggested that he go into SDN Legal, since he was a fully licensed attorney, which was a shock to the rest of them.
“You’ll never guess who turned up to work today.” Bob’s voice made Helen look towards the door.
“Sansweet?” Guessed Helen, making Bob shake his head.
“No, Gazerbeam.” Bob put his brief case on the table, “Apparently, he heard that SDN were looking for him.”
“Jack must’ve told him.” Reasoned Helen, looking at the folder with her heroes files in it.
“No, Jack was as surprised as we were,” Said Bob, “but he’s on board, which I think is great.”
Helen looked at Bob, since starting at SDN, he’d started to lose weight, and he seemed much happier in himself.
“How’s getting to know your team going?” Asked Bob, making Helen sigh.
“Voyd’s a lot like Violet, if they were closer in age, I would suggest they spend some time together,” Said Helen, “He-Lectrix seems a bit haughty, but he’s a guitarist in a band, Reflux seems nice, but I wouldn’t put him out on… heavy calls, you know? Krushauer can, well, crush things, but he can’t reverse the damage, which could be a problem. Screech is, well, interesting, to say the least, but he’s primarily nocturnal, meaning he’s more or less useless in the day, and Brick’s… she’s…”
“As dumb as her name implies?” Violet’s voice made them jump, before she appeared at the table.
Violet looked different, the main difference was that she had her hair tied back, but she seemed to be slightly uncomfortable.
