Moon 01, pt 2; Alpineknoll is scarred for life
Original written description of this event below:
(Alpineknoll’s eyes go wide, mouth agape with confused horror. Yewstars only seem to glaze over with a hollow, knowing contempt.
He motions for her to stay back, but Alpineknoll ignores him, stepping through the bushes and into view of the thunderpath.
What she sees there continues to haunt her, each time she closes her eyes.
A twisted body, back twisted into a u shape and once folded over itself. Paws outstretched, mouth agape. Eyes wide, just glazing over, still full of longing pain.
She’s only snapped from her horrified stupor when Yewstar carefully approaches, running his tail along her back and speaking her name.
He explains that this is something that happens often. That twolegs are cruel, mindless beasts, that hurt things for the sake of hurting them.)
As you can see some things changed, like the shape of the body, but. Idk I just felt like including the written alternative as well












