I was looking something up in World of Thedas vol. 2 when I stumbled upon this ancient elven poem again.
I think an alternative translation is roughly this:
Without the eternal nothing/never heart tree (tree of the People), We cannot journey with spirits, without time's help. We have no purpose without our markings, We (?) inevitably become nothing within sad freedom. We do not believe, the way of war without glory. We do not grant/give the Wolf a home, the way of exile.
So basically, I think it is declaring Solas an enemy of the people for putting up the Veil and trapping the Evanuris?













