#xiying.tl

[ireverents]

tgcf revised—mu qing & xie lian's reconciliation, chapters 192-193, translated by me

note: i'm not a translation professional, i did this for fun to give a rough idea of what happened in the revised version of this scene. it's also inevitable for subtleties to get lost in translation so do be aware. i know the english prose sounds a little awkward because chinese prose works differently but i wanted to translate it as directly as possible & any attempts at making it sound "smoother" or nicer would demand biased input from me which i wanted to minimize

edit; found a typo in the first slide. mu qing should say "even thought" not "even though"

[ireverents]

tgcf revised—mu qing leaving, chapter 152, translated by me

note: i'm not a translation professional, i did this for fun, not claiming it to be 100% accurate. it's also inevitable for subtleties to get lost in translation so do be aware. i know the english prose sounds a little awkward because chinese prose works differently but i wanted to translate it as directly as possible & any attempts at making it sound "smoother" or nicer would demand biased input from me which i wanted to minimize

note: where i wrote that xie lian says "you should leave" the original text is 你走吧, i think if i were to translate it directly without caring for grammar it'd be "you go"—to me the sentiment seems to be halfway between "you can leave" and "you should leave" if that makes sense? it doesn't feel as harsh as "you should leave" but its still an imperative.