The Poison Brewer.
I found this old practice that turned into a more refined portrait of one of my fantasy characters. I still like it, so up it goes. The Character is now called Yomajn but back when I drew this, the function of this character was filled by 2 equally mysterious, black haired elves, who were both from a clan that was thought to be extinct...
hard to write that believable if two of the main cast are from that extinct, mysterious people. And very hard to tell them apart, if the only personal difference was their scale of mental demage due to one having lived longer and surviving more abuse. His people are viciously hunted down, because they're feared. But that would not exterminate them... this clan decided to not go on living, because they are insanely old and do not comprehend the world anymore. Sage, very powerfull and doomed. Always fun, these chaps.
The story is in German and I uploaded the prologue here. I would be very, very grateful for honest feedback, because i do not want to emberass myself and consider applying at a publishers house with it. So, if you read german and can warm your heart for fantasy AND have some idle time, i would appreciate any honest feedback.
Thank you warmly.